heat check

[one trak mind]

whats up im new here. just wanted to post up and join.
Cadillac paint spackled/ hands shackled to the steering wheel/ veering illegally backwards until I max the axels/ skid and watch the break pads/ until white shit comes out of the exhaust like a gay dad/ lay back close my eyes as it crashes into a maybach/ smoke out of the front and out of the side like a loose blunt full of swag/ that’s how it comes full circle to suckers/ pull out shells to turtle this fucker/ jump him like hurdles and do him up like Ruckers/ put away the ski mask/ I don’t like the way cotton feels on a rubber/ matter fact get some knee pads cause you only got heat on you in the summer.

[DiSSENT]

Not bad, could use a little work in my opinion..but I've seen much worse. Maybe it's just because I'm used to multiples & more lyrical rhymes though. Regardless, keep doing your thing & keep practicing. Peace*