Violence living!

[bez]

Young life, goin through scrappers and pain,
Feel enraged caught up in these shackles and chains,
Murder reigns cause all around I see blood and death,
Mothers crying overs sons with holes in their chests,
Cant rest easy at night time hear nothing but sirens,
Rushing to another scene of unprovoked violence,
The sound of silence is deafening, but reality is sick,
Another gunshot to proove what? that we hard as kids?
All acting like dicks tryin to boast whos the biggest,
But the winner is the one who lives life to the finish,
Use God as your whitness and dont conform to the fights,
Cos all of us have the power to perform under lights,
But if you abuse life then you'll never get famous,
You gotta be smart from the start dont be actin brainless,
It aint shameless to be intelligent in an intellectual way,
An smile when you recieve your diploma on graduation day,
Dont listen to what haters say just stay off the streets,
Get a hobby like writing, mc'in or making beats,
Keep off your feet and you wont see the gunnin,
Your stan smiths wont see no runnin and be free of scuffin,
Lifes worth somethin in fact its worth dying for,
But I wanna prolong the day I'm cryin on the floor,
Seein the bright white door and heading up the steps,
Hopefully we'll meet one day, if you do whats best!

[DiSSENT]

Personally, I think this is the best rhyme I've ever read from you. I felt the multiple rhymes, the realism it had to it, the flow, and the vocabulry. Much props & respect, this drop had a lot of mature substance. I just have to applaud this type of work cuz I can relate to that mentality. I grew up rough too, trying to escape it; so I know how it feels..it's quite a struggle. Keep doing your thing, I can't express how much I like this shit. Stay up, dawg. 9/10 - Peace*