Fighting music!

[bez]

Its been a while since I propped myself to death,
Cos I'm hard as fuck nobody ever crosses Bez,
I'll take shots to the chest and get up laughing,
Screaming for more shit to happen,
Put my heart into rappin my soul into scrappin,
My body into weights and my fists into faces,
Goto different places different parts of my city,
An act the same and nobody ever says shit to me,
Look scally wit a shaved head, blinged up wit my rolex,
There goes that lad Bez, everyone knows this,
Kiddas sniff coke up their noses, but I dont do that,
I got parents who love me who would disown me if I did that,
Aint into that, want my family to show love,
But I aint ashamed to tell em how I've grown up,
Got drunk, throw up, fought, and been niked,
Swung, punched, been hit, stomped and then kicked,
Thats the life I've lifed, the life of kids,
That grow up outter focus with a mind that hopeless,
Brainwashed by teachers tellin me I aint gunna do shit,
Now they cant get away from Bez's spits and hits,
Give em all the shits, cos they did me wrong,
Every prik in school will one day get shouted out in a song,
Cos all along I've had a plan become the man and create,
Forget about the hate and pretend everyones a mate,
Then slate em to death on a track and hurt em, scare em,
Cos you were never a friend, so I'll scar em and burn em!

[DiSSENT]

Not bad, but not your best content or rhyme-wise. IMO you got skills expressing emotion & taking on concepts. Keep writing & elevating though. We all got room for improvement. Peace*