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thizzmaster

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S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
« on: June 06, 2005, 12:23:43 AM »
sac town is da place i rep
age 15 and i spit da best
ppl here my rhymes and dey become amazed
da kid so young  but he continues 2 blaze 8)
u can spit ur hardest i wont be fazed
cuz in da end im da1 wit da pasin grade
not much 2 say wen u touch da mike
ill leave u stumblin and fallin like iron mike
im not mac dre but u can mr furly
cuz afta da battle ill be gettin bossed by ur gurlie
ima end dis rap off nice and sweet
jut rember da name j roc dats me
thizz iz wat it iz......im in da buldin and im feelin like yeee r-i-p 2 da mac d-r-e......were not poppin collars now were checkin purses and guess wat it gets worses
 

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Re: S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2005, 08:12:27 AM »
Somewhat simplistic rhymin', but we all gotta start somewhere. Keep on writing & improving/elevating your skills, homie. At 15, I wasn't spittin' much different..just don't quit. You got potential..stay up - Peace*
 

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Re: S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2005, 11:15:03 AM »
ya keep it up and try to get deeper.. only real complaint is u stole the furly/girlie from fellin myself... yadidimean?