Author Topic: its me again  (Read 117 times)

thizzmaster

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its me again
« on: June 12, 2005, 10:57:03 PM »
To me, it's a Small Wonder, like Vicki, why I'm picky
These niggas suck like hickies
and still get the shit they slip in like Mickies
I'm sick of the hater-players, bring on the regulators
With the flavors like a farm team fucking with the majors
Like a river how I run through it, I do it so cold
Freezin up your bodily fluids, your style is old
You runnin your mouth, but don't really know what you be talkin about
You should retire, get that complimentary watch, be out!
Yo, with the quickness, so swift you miss this lyrical fitness
Now get this, these emcees wanna test me like litmus, bear witness
I'm like shot clocks, interstate cops, and blood clots
My point is, your flow can stop!
By all means, you need more practice, take that ass home
Everybody lookin at you, fish tanks and drome
In full effect, I stay catchin lyrical rep
And keep it blacker than the back of your neck
What you expect, that shit's hollerin
Cause we developin the followin
gettin played like ?stones? off tapes and ?dollar vans?
I'll reverse you, universal, your demise is first
Before your rise gets worse
You need a night nurse like Gregory, beggin me
Stop it hurts, what you say to me?
Like thats supposed to mean something
You don't wanna scene, frontin in the club
Your actin, I don't buy it, I got the Dub
Come on everybody, come on and show your love
thizz iz wat it iz......im in da buldin and im feelin like yeee r-i-p 2 da mac d-r-e......were not poppin collars now were checkin purses and guess wat it gets worses
 

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Re: its me again
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2005, 12:13:36 PM »
Your verse rhymed, and you got some skill, but this verse was way superficial, dig deep.
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Re: its me again
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2005, 10:55:36 PM »
gettin played like ?stones? off tapes and ?dollar vans?

what does that mean?
 

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Re: its me again
« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2005, 10:42:59 PM »
rhymes flowed..but don't understand ya concept.

good work though
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