Author Topic: peep dis  (Read 116 times)

thizzmaster

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peep dis
« on: June 12, 2005, 11:00:13 PM »
Yo I'm tryin to make a dollar out of what makes sense
Add it up, told my daddy I'd be a rich man
You never know when your fate gon' switch hand
Get today's solid ground out of yesterday's quicksand
I was a young boy -- who dreamt about being a big man
on small looseleaf sheets I sketched a big plan
Gotta handle business properly, boost up my economy
Store it up and get my mom some waterfront property
Yesterday was not for me but nowaday it's time for me
The streets is watchin me, I watch back, that's the policy
Movin along my oddesey like blood through the artery
Navigate the treacherous and make it seem effortless
Let those who make the exodus seekin the North beacon
from beatin and hog-eatin, from punishment all season
from hands cracked and bleedin -- cotton thorns in your palms
It's for y'all that I sketch these songs, and it goes..
Yea though I walk through the valley of the shadow
I fear no man, because faith is the aarow
My vocal chord travel worldwide to block narrow
We can blow with the ammo or go mano-a-mano
thizz iz wat it iz......im in da buldin and im feelin like yeee r-i-p 2 da mac d-r-e......were not poppin collars now were checkin purses and guess wat it gets worses
 

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Re: peep dis
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2005, 10:08:10 AM »
i really didnt like the beginning, but it picks up and  the ends flows well
 

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Re: peep dis
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2005, 10:10:08 AM »
hmm not bad atall.