Author Topic: hip hop  (Read 116 times)

thizzmaster

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hip hop
« on: June 12, 2005, 11:04:50 PM »
Speech is my hammer bang the world into shape
Now let it fall... My restlessness is my nemesis
It's hard to really chill and sit still
Committed to page I write rhymes
Sometimes won't finish for days
Scrutinize my literature from the large to the miniature
I mathematically add-minister
Subtract the wack
Selector, wheel it back, I'm feeling that
From the core to the perimeter black,
You know the motto
Stay fluid even in staccato
 Full blooded, full throttle
Breathe deep inside the trunk hollow
There's the hum, young man where you from
sac town number one
Native son, speaking in the native tongue
I got my eyes on tomorrow While you still try to follow where it is
I'm on the Ave where it lives and dies
Violently, silently
Shine so vibrantly that eyes squint to catch a glimpse
Embrace the bass with my dark ink fingertips
Used to speak the king's English
But caught a rash on my lips
So now my chat just like dis
Long range from the base-line
Move like an apparition
Float to the ground with ammuntion
Move from the gate, voice cued on your tape
Putting food on your plate
Many crews can relate
We went from picking cotton
To chain gang line chopping
To Be-Bopping
To Hip-Hopping
Blues people got the blue chip stock option
Invisible man, got the whole world watching
I'm high, low, east, west,
All over your map
I'm getting big props, with this thing called hip hop
Where you can either get paid or get shot
When your product in stock
The fair-weather friends flock
When your chart position drop
Then the phone calls....
Chill for a minute
Let's see whoelse tops
Snatch your shelf spot
Don't gas yourself ock
The industry just a better built cell block
A long way from the shell tops
And the bells that L rocked
thizz iz wat it iz......im in da buldin and im feelin like yeee r-i-p 2 da mac d-r-e......were not poppin collars now were checkin purses and guess wat it gets worses
 

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hip hop
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2005, 07:27:36 AM »
I was really feelin' your vocabulary & structure/wording. It was dope reading it in my mind cuz it's a different format than having just all end rhymes. Good content too, it made me think a bit & I related to some things. Keep doin' your thing, dawg. Stay up, Peace*