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A Hot 16
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authentic
Muthafuckin' Don!
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A Hot 16
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June 14, 2005, 03:10:44 PM »
its all chips and salsa and turkey and gravy
catchy rhymes is all i've been workin lately
heres 16 for the ones who want me down
you want to go 1 on 1, dont catch me later, catch me now
or come and arrest me now, but how? lyrical disruption?
my rhymes will break your balls you'll need a checkup for a urinal function
watch your mouth before you make a big mistake
cause i know the sissies, yall sweet like cake
dawg, your rhymes are average, so when are you gonna face it?
conjunctions? grammar isn't my best, it's word placement
replace it, make it different and easy to comprehend
got away w/ keystyle murder, i'm free now, shoulda got me then
authentic cause the rhymes were anything but sloppy, man
cant catch him slipping cause his rhymes descend
this rap life is a fairy tale, i tried to get into it, so i pretend
to be a thug, but im not, the rhythm is getting hot, hitting the G spot
re-knot cause the laces come undone, look how many guys my rhymes took out without a gun
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Re: A Hot 16
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June 14, 2005, 04:12:28 PM »
didnt seem to flow too well, but i like that u kept it real and that last line was tight
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