Twenty Bars Ahead

[authentic]

your dome is fractured, 3 holes and loose screws
now who's the 3 year old watching blues clues
homie you screwed, don't let me start explaining
9millimeter in your face don't wanna hear you complaining
the beretta will rip through ya leatha, leavin your chest dismantled
i have plans that i cant explain, dont ask about your death, it's handled
its 12, its midnight, the dogs are barking, they want your meat
at the game when a chick approaches you, she dont want you she want your seat
westcoast is troubled they need something, but thats not you
we were first competing but look who outgrew, not you
holla at me if you want to drop the keyboard do a freetyle
i can take time outta my day to humiliate, but meanwhile
im makin paper and your pre-writing your rhymes
so thats basically me fighting your rhymes
done deal like the family, quinn, ya boy, and messy
allergy season? imma start sneezin, so god bless me
yes he does, its authentic back to put the game in a full nelson
can find me in your cd warehouse and movie theater like van helsing
they compare my garage to jay leno's cause i push heck of cars
dont test me, i got more 4, 5, and 9's than a deck of cards
ya feel me

[K0NfUzIoN]

loved it... that flow was clean

[authentic]

thank you mr konfuzion

[bez]

dope, the cards line was dope!!

[CrookedDynasty]

Sounded good man.... Keep it up. *Thumbs Up*

[authentic]

thanks guys

[smila]

i liked it but....that cards line wasnt urs.....LLOYD MO_FUCKIN BANKS....DA BOY WONDER!!!!!

DONT BITE LINES.......EVA AGAIN

I CANT BE BOTHERED TO CHECK DA REST OF YA SHIT BUT SUSPECT IT MAY NOT BE URS

[authentic]

i liked it but....that cards line wasnt urs.....LLOYD MO_FUCKIN BANKS....DA BOY WONDER!!!!!

DONT BITE LINES.......EVA AGAIN

I CANT BE BOTHERED TO CHECK DA REST OF YA SHIT BUT SUSPECT IT MAY NOT BE URS

alright beezy that talks greezy set a thread and i'll mutilate u rookie...EVERY RAPPER TO THIS DATE HAS USED A RECYCLED OR USED RHYME FAGGOT.

[Mr. O]

i liked it but....that cards line wasnt urs.....LLOYD MO_FUCKIN BANKS....DA BOY WONDER!!!!!

DONT BITE LINES.......EVA AGAIN

I CANT BE BOTHERED TO CHECK DA REST OF YA SHIT BUT SUSPECT IT MAY NOT BE URS

alright beezy that talks greezy set a thread and i'll mutilate u rookie...EVERY RAPPER TO THIS DATE HAS USED A RECYCLED OR USED RHYME FAGGOT.

not really...

[authentic]

i liked it but....that cards line wasnt urs.....LLOYD MO_FUCKIN BANKS....DA BOY WONDER!!!!!

DONT BITE LINES.......EVA AGAIN

I CANT BE BOTHERED TO CHECK DA REST OF YA SHIT BUT SUSPECT IT MAY NOT BE URS

alright beezy that talks greezy set a thread and i'll mutilate u rookie...EVERY RAPPER TO THIS DATE HAS USED A RECYCLED OR USED RHYME FAGGOT.

not really...

cmon dawg name a rapper that hasnt used "the bobby brown and whitney" line...

[The Hired Gun]

Yeah, shit was coo', but...

Santana - Mic Check
"I just sneeze and the track move / god bless me, yes, that's true"

Lloyd Banks - Let's Get That Money Man
"we got more 4's, 5's, and 9's than a deck of cards"

The Juelz line can slide, but c'mon mayne, you bit Banks' line wrod-for-word.

[[sepehr]]

Lmao @ people not understandin rappers used recycled ish all the time...
Authentic was right with the bobby and whitney thing, and what about that im a franchise like a houston rocket shit? Countless more...

[authentic]

haha tru sepehr...they wont understand until there favorite rapper does it, then they weill be in denial for months until they understand rap is a bunch of people reinacting each other. For hired gun i feel what ya saying but i never heard mic check for more than 30 seconds cause i hate the song so i never really heard that, but im christian so the rhyme to me made sense

[Disceptive AssAssin]

weak at the start. tight at the end