Author Topic: what it takes  (Read 117 times)

Spicemuthafuc*in1

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what it takes
« on: July 05, 2005, 03:03:40 AM »
It’s a full time job constantly looking over your shoulders
Never any disclosure when your waiting for the payback to unfold ya
Some business you took care of has seemed to find its way back
All that’s anything to me like my life and cash at risk cause the payback

My neck is hurting from constantly watching my back
Peekin through windows terrified to trust anyone when it comes to my scratch
It’s a terrible feeling not knowing whats waiting around the corner
With no one to warn ya of the constant drama that’s going down in killafornia

Verbals swerving in and out of the jaw like a plan more like a trap
Words written from left to right, top to bottom forming into sick paragraphs
Notes and lyrics that make ya head shake and scadaddle
Over beats that stay rockin so hard that make your ears rattle

My mechanical grammar knockin hard like a hammer never any bammer
When the dude is taking care of business smoking until im relaxin
Blunts so fat they seem everlasting until they all burned out
About the same time another blunt is about to be inhaled and exhaled back out

At times reality seems like a distance, almost an object
that’s just an inch too far out of reach can you understand the concept
Disorganized like a mind that needs to be stabilized
Because its trying to grasp the messages of satan and not the path laid out by christ

If rhymes don’t have a reason then theres no point in spitting them
Aint no point in wasting our time if your going to fall off like your eminem
Whats style without substance its words that mean nothing
Talented Paragraphs need to turn vocals into lyrics that mean something

Creativity is judged on an artists originality and music immortality
And not how many albums they sell or how many videos they have on b.e.t
And not appearances on m.t.v. not spins on the radio
Not rappin just about their jewelry, cars and their pretty hoes
 

Mr. O

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Re: what it takes
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2005, 12:47:48 PM »
i feel ya lyrics..specially the christ part...good lyric...
but i couldn't feel certain part of it...flow doesn't seem right...don't know..maybe it's just me...
anyway..all luv...ease out
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