Author Topic: FREEDOM!  (Read 103 times)

bez

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FREEDOM!
« on: September 02, 2005, 08:55:48 AM »
Life ain't promised to become sumit super,
So I gotta acknowledge I may not have a future,
Path ain't paved, ways remain unexplained,
May as well be chained cos I feel enslaved,
Tired of dreaming, gotta start achieving,
Cos my mind keeps bleeding to be the best its feinding,
Listen to music it keeps the senses buildin,
Its the way you wanna go, so, don't listen to the senseless children,
We gotta keep breathin, as a nation as a race,
Against this uphill struggle we constantly face,
Don't like the terror, can't feel the killin,
In this era why ain't we free from murdering an villians,
I just hope we can conquer and once again walk safe,
Freedom, the word itself can put a smile on your face.
 

G funker

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Re: FREEDOM!
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2005, 01:53:23 AM »
Nice, but if you say race,face dont rhyme safe and face
 

g unot

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Re: FREEDOM!
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2005, 12:05:51 PM »
work on it