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Review my new track "Psuedo South 2", then give me a link and I'll review yours

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TraceOneInfinite:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=482775

It's called "Psuedo South Part 2".  Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

h cottie is bac-tive?:
i wasn't really feelin the first verse. the 2nd was definately better and the chorus wasn't bad either

the beat was good too

Dargine:
I think that the intro shouldn't have had the little rhyme in it, it could confuse people in a way that they think that the 1st verse already started while it haven't, and that just doesn't sound good as a intro, if you're already known you can do that, but right now for a track on soundclick people will turn it of and skip to another artist 'cause they think it sucks, other then that the track is not bad at all, the verses had some nice flows, just ain't really feelin' the voices, or maybe that's because of the recording quality, it's different then the quality of the beat which doesn't sound good, but you can't help that... Overall it's a great track, not something I would listen to all the time, but good for what it is.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: Dargine on March 29, 2006, 12:33:20 PM ---I think that the intro shouldn't have had the little rhyme in it, it could confuse people in a way that they think that the 1st verse already started while it haven't, and that just doesn't sound good as a intro, if you're already known you can do that, but right now for a track on soundclick people will turn it of and skip to another artist 'cause they think it sucks, other then that the track is not bad at all, the verses had some nice flows, just ain't really feelin' the voices, or maybe that's because of the recording quality, it's different then the quality of the beat which doesn't sound good, but you can't help that... Overall it's a great track, not something I would listen to all the time, but good for what it is.

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Yo thanks man, I really appreciate that.  That was a really thorough review.  That was the kind of review I was looking for.  Props.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: Dargine on March 29, 2006, 12:33:20 PM ---I think that the intro shouldn't have had the little rhyme in it, it could confuse people in a way that they think that the 1st verse already started while it haven't, and that just doesn't sound good as a intro, if you're already known you can do that, but right now for a track on soundclick people will turn it of and skip to another artist 'cause they think it sucks

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I went in and fixed up the intro.

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