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Mental Meltdown (Freestyle)
« on: March 05, 2006, 06:51:45 AM »
my life's like building beautiful art with filth and Garbage
choosing Artistry over ganbanging, still, there's Hardships
I face crazy odds, the underdogg; Engulfed In My Past
the Bulk Of My Raps comes from me managing Multiple Tasks
just this morning, I woke up at the fucking Crack Of Dawn
worked, scored an eighth and got busted, now my Cash Is Gone
I spend my days writing rhymes, riding Buses To Work
dealing with rude assholes, pricks, sickos, Bustas And Jerks
kickin' up dirt, flirtin' with disaster, but I got No Love
for myself or others, so to fill my voids, I Smoke Bud
I almost went to jail for my homie, but I did Not Snitch
never squeeled, karma came through, don't fall for Cop's Tricks
I got so much shit on my mind, my heart feels the Strain As Well
"city of angels"? More like a demon-ridden Painful Hell
I'm tryin' to be the most Honest, 'til I need a Headstone
mentally, 1 of the Strongest - I survive all on my Own*
"I'm an Urban Legend, in God's eyes, the Perfect Seven
the First To Get In the Devil's ass with a Verse From Heaven" - Big Pun
 

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Re: Mental Meltdown (Freestyle)
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2006, 01:15:57 AM »
my life's like building beautiful art with filth and Garbage
choosing Artistry over ganbanging, still, there's Hardships
I face crazy odds, the underdogg; Engulfed In My Past
the Bulk Of My Raps comes from me managing Multiple Tasks
just this morning, I woke up at the fucking Crack Of Dawn
worked, scored an eighth and got busted, now my Cash Is Gone
I spend my days writing rhymes, riding Buses To Work
dealing with rude assholes, pricks, sickos, Bustas And Jerks
kickin' up dirt, flirtin' with disaster, but I got No Love
for myself or others, so to fill my voids, I Smoke Bud
I almost went to jail for my homie, but I did Not Snitch
never squeeled, karma came through, don't fall for Cop's Tricks
I got so much shit on my mind, my heart feels the Strain As Well
"city of angels"? More like a demon-ridden Painful Hell
I'm tryin' to be the most Honest, 'til I need a Headstone
mentally, 1 of the Strongest - I survive all on my Own*

tight verse, great opening
Givin' respect to 2pac September 7th-13th The Day Hip-Hop Died

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Re: Mental Meltdown (Freestyle)
« Reply #2 on: April 05, 2006, 02:36:59 PM »
good writing
u got talent