The first time I post my lines here

[K.Dub]

Before I wrote this rhyme, my life almost collapsed
Actually it did collapse, 'cus I stepped in so many traps
We started from scratch, and here we are (where)
My wounds are healed, but they left me so many scars
Everybody's tryna get a part of me
People they don't think that my heart can see
And seperate the real ones, from the fake ones
I'm tryna be polite, and say no with even break bones
With so many zones, and so many clones
It's hard to stay on top of the throne
But when I'm alone, focused and writing my lines
I'm in my darkest spot, goin' deep in my mind
Sometimes I pray to God to help get my life back on track
'Cus I can't hold the weight of the world on my back

Any thoughts, meanings?

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

Before I wrote this rhyme, my life almost collapsed
Actually it did collapse, 'cus I stepped in so many traps
We started from scratch, and here we are (where)
My wounds are healed, but they left me so many scars
Everybody's tryna get a part of me
People they don't think that my heart can see
And seperate the real ones, from the fake ones
I'm tryna be polite, and say no with even break bones
With so many zones, and so many clones
It's hard to stay on top of the throne
But when I'm alone, focused and writing my lines
I'm in my darkest spot, goin' deep in my mind
Sometimes I pray to God to help get my life back on track
'Cus I can't hold the weight of the world on my back

Any thoughts, meanings?

I'm sorry to hear your life collapsed/
But keep bringing those highly potent raps/
Maybe you've been stepping in too many traps/
Well let me tell you how to get your whole life on track/
Set your affairs straight and only worship the highest/
That will put your life in order, and also try this...
Keep expressin yourself with ill flows like the one you just dealt/
And then one day you'll achieve knowledge of self/
We're all in this Earth together strugglin to get back to da essence/
And if rhymin give you meanin' then keep repeatin' one, two, mic check it...

[K.Dub]

Hehe, thanks
Those lines were good

[swangin and bangin]

the only thing i saw was that girl nothin else.

[AlerG]

I have a similar feeling, i seem to lose control
And do negative type shit that helps bruise my soul
But i refuse to leave a legacy compared to rotton apples
I ain't mean New York City, but i'm at the bottom scratchin
Going through mad struggle, hussles, gambles and deals
But on my two feet standin still, demandin the real
Show me the light, take my life from the dark
I'll give my soul for inner peace, and that's right from the heart

nice thread, enjoyable read 

chill

[K.Dub]

I have a similar feeling, i seem to lose control
And do negative type shit that helps bruise my soul
But i refuse to leave a legacy compared to rotton apples
I ain't mean New York City, but i'm at the bottom scratchin
Going through mad struggle, hussles, gambles and deals
But on my two feet standin still, demandin the real
Show me the light, take my life from the dark
I'll give my soul for inner peace, and that's right from the heart

nice thread, enjoyable read 

chill

nice one