Supreme Lyricism

[rik]

You're about to witness a display of supreme lyricism/
I'll sit back while you read this with extreme criticism/
Thinking about all the kids that are starving in the streets/
Wishing I had enough money to treat them all to a feast/
I try not to think of the bad and focus on the good/
But it's so damn hard when you're living in the hood/
Just the other day I seen a cat get shot where he stood/
You see the same struggles from Oakland down to Inglewood/
That right there leaves me asking myself these questions/
Why do these ignorant muthafuckas insist on killing themsleves?/
Why are little kids joining gangs at the tender age of twelve?/
Is my final destination a life in a cell?/ And when I die will I go to heaven
or hell?/Since I don't have an answer at the sky I stare/ Praying to God that
everything in my life goes well.

['Illicit']

nice piece

[rik]

nice piece

Thanks.

[TraceOneInfinite]

nice piece

Thanks.

Yo, rik, on the real homie, you got skills, and you've been pretty active lately.  I've been working with MDogg about an Elite versus Melanin Deficient battle, we tryin to get things on a poppin at this forum like they used to be.  I'm going to put a word in to MDogg about you joinin his crew, Elite, cause they might be re-establishing themselves really soon.  So if your interested, let myself or MDogg know because this forum needs new blood, peace.

[rik]

nice piece

Thanks.

Yo, rik, on the real homie, you got skills, and you've been pretty active lately.  I've been working with MDogg about an Elite versus Melanin Deficient battle, we tryin to get things on a poppin at this forum like they used to be.  I'm going to put a word in to MDogg about you joinin his crew, Elite, cause they might be re-establishing themselves really soon.  So if your interested, let myself or MDogg know because this forum needs new blood, peace.

Good lookin man...I never really posted in here cus I didn't really rap. But I'm starting to write now u know do something productive. That little battle thing sounds coo man I'm down with it just fill me in on the details.

[TraceOneInfinite]

Good lookin man...I never really posted in here cus I didn't really rap. But I'm starting to write now u know do something productive. That little battle thing sounds coo man I'm down with it just fill me in on the details.

Word, I'm waitin to hear back from MDogg, if he doesn't pick you up, we have a spot open on Melanin Deficient if you decide you want it.  Because a couple guys we put in our crew we haven't heard back from yet.

Anyway, I'll let you know as soon as I hear from MDogg and we'll go from there, maybe we'll get in a huge bidding war for your services, lol.  We could make a dope thread about it or something and battle it out for the rights to your contract, lol.  Your like the top freeagent, num sayin.  We trying to breathe life back into this forum, so that the skill level, ideas, creativity, interest, and activity can increase.  Peace.

[rik]

Good lookin man...I never really posted in here cus I didn't really rap. But I'm starting to write now u know do something productive. That little battle thing sounds coo man I'm down with it just fill me in on the details.

Word, I'm waitin to hear back from MDogg, if he doesn't pick you up, we have a spot open on Melanin Deficient if you decide you want it.  Because a couple guys we put in our crew we haven't heard back from yet.

Anyway, I'll let you know as soon as I hear from MDogg and we'll go from there, maybe we'll get in a huge bidding war for your services, lol.  We could make a dope thread about it or something and battle it out for the rights to your contract, lol.  Your like the top freeagent, num sayin.  We trying to breathe life back into this forum, so that the skill level, ideas, creativity, interest, and activity can increase.  Peace.

Fa sho man.

[TraceOneInfinite]

Good lookin man...I never really posted in here cus I didn't really rap. But I'm starting to write now u know do something productive. That little battle thing sounds coo man I'm down with it just fill me in on the details.

Word, I'm waitin to hear back from MDogg, if he doesn't pick you up, we have a spot open on Melanin Deficient if you decide you want it.  Because a couple guys we put in our crew we haven't heard back from yet.

Anyway, I'll let you know as soon as I hear from MDogg and we'll go from there, maybe we'll get in a huge bidding war for your services, lol.  We could make a dope thread about it or something and battle it out for the rights to your contract, lol.  Your like the top freeagent, num sayin.  We trying to breathe life back into this forum, so that the skill level, ideas, creativity, interest, and activity can increase.  Peace.

Fa sho man.

Do you have AIM or MSN, if so, I can holler at you about it over there.  My AIM is HajjIbrahim03.