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New beat... My best beat in a long time!.. Check it and leave feedback!

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Timmeeeehh:
Tight.. The bassline is a bit boring. Drums are cool, but can have throughout the beat bit more variation in it, double snareclap, or more bassdrums sometimes.
I think you should fill it a bit more, it still sounds very empty. Maybe some backgroundsounds like people talking or something.. Just giving some thoughts.. Keep on it

Oklin:

--- Quote from: John "Prima" Doe on August 30, 2006, 01:40:59 PM ---Tight.. The bassline is a bit boring. Drums are cool, but can have throughout the beat bit more variation in it, double snareclap, or more bassdrums sometimes.
I think you should fill it a bit more, it still sounds very empty. Maybe some backgroundsounds like people talking or something.. Just giving some thoughts.. Keep on it

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aight i feel you... the bassline is just following the tones which was in the background og the piano sample, imo that went out pretty dope.. you might be right on more variation.. thta is deffently something i need to do more with my beats...

btw.. i am a part of Melanin Deficient now.. my beats is also up on our soundclick: http://www.soundclick.com/melanindeficientcrew

bLaDe:
I'm feelin' this quite a bit, I would say that you have improved; good work on the drums, and the bassline isn't bad.  It has more originality to it than your previous work, i'm feelin the piano and sax too, it adds some flavour to it.  Chorus is alright, for some reason it seemes suited for singing on perhaps, but it's still doable with rap(chorus).  I would agree with the cat who said you might try adding more variation to it, but otherwise I like it, and i'm feelin the flow and overall tone, peace

-b[X]

Oklin:

--- Quote from: bLaDe HeLi[X] on August 30, 2006, 02:28:04 PM ---I'm feelin' this quite a bit, I would say that you have improved; good work on the drums, and the bassline isn't bad.  It has more originality to it than your previous work, i'm feelin the piano and sax too, it adds some flavour to it.  Chorus is alright, for some reason it seemes suited for singing on perhaps, but it's still doable with rap(chorus).  I would agree with the cat who said you might try adding more variation to it, but otherwise I like it, and i'm feelin the flow and overall tone, peace

-b[X]

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thanks on the feedback ;)

i appreciate it

Bramsterdam (see ya):
73 & 38  I dig alot

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