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Mr. O:
"it's systematic" (rock/experiemental)

and

"Givin' it up" (rap) (loop only.)

http://www.myspace.com/jrtiktrytitid

thank u

Mr. O:
up

Timmeeeehh:
givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

Mr. O:

--- Quote from: John "Prima" Doe on September 02, 2006, 01:28:16 AM ---givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

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thx for comment..but for systamic song..is not rap..it's experiemental...so yeah...

Oklin:
they are both allright.. i guess you need to work some more on both... at Systematic i don't like the snare.. wayyy too much room on it..

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