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3 Way Battle: Quiet Truth vs. Abdul-Infinite vs. Mo Dizzle (voting finished)

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TraceOneInfinite:
uppin for votes!

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: M Dogg for Obama on October 16, 2006, 05:49:14 PM ---

As for my vote:

Quite Truth, you can nice, very nice. You flow was more fluid than when we battled, this is a good thing. You also has some good lines, and well, not so good lines.

good line: "this one nigga used to have a cat in his avatar cuz he knew he was a pussy"
very nice, attack something that he can't deny, take back, or defend. it's like the Quik line are Eiht with no G, just not as classic, but it's up there

not a good line: "now wat this other nigga gotta understand is that Im a pig at work
so u aint gonna eat me up cuz he muslim and muslims dont eat pork"
first off you called yourself a pig, which could mean police, which is not good Hip-Hop sense, second, even though work and pork should rhyme, they don't rhyme well.

Dizzle, you have the same problem I have, we have to keep our bars shorter for better flow. But your rhymes where on point, in terms of flowing and keeping the pace of the reading easy. It ain't easy to do that, making it flow on paper, because the reader can't hear what you intend to say, but you did well. Now you had some really nice lines, and some not so nice lines... lol.

nice line: "It's Friday the '13th', you know what that means? Bad luck for ya'll whether or not you superstitious/
My words are a disease, might give you Hepatitis C, or make you 'Melanin Deficient'/"
the bars were too long, but it was a nice diss using the crews name and the date, very nice. I also like the bars before that one, the Lil' Kim, threads, breast line, very nice.

not so nice lines:"I ain't a doctor but I'll leave you with more shots than a diabetic; better know I carry the cure/
A possible win for Mo Z. Dizz; it's gotta be damn near ensured/"
I don't care if you write it early, and then copy and paste it at the end, the last bar should be strong, if not your strongest bar.

In the end, it's a matter of one really great line, (the pussy cat line) a couple of nice ones (the cut throat one was very nice) and plenty of average ones (about everything else was average, cheerios? between the lines was alight, I used something like that, but to me it was a filler line, so I'll judge it as that for you since I've heard it before) verse many really nice lines (WWE/No Mercy was done correctly, I will give you the pussy cat comeback, but in the future, NEVER REFERENCE A VERSE BEFORE YOURS! It puts Quite Truth as a unfar disadvantage, but everything between bar two to the second to last bar were very well done). Greatness beats nice, but that "great" line was not the classic line that Quik delievered to Eiht. After all, Eiht handed Quik his ass in the whole battle, but Quik won because everyone remembers one line. In this case, no one will win with one line, so with a slight advantage from me, I say Mo DIzzle won. good job.

--- End quote ---

Ya'll can still count MDogg's vote if you want.  He didn't let me spit my turn, so I copied and pasted his post down here.

TraceOneInfinite:
As it stands now...

Mo Dizzle-  2 votes
Quiet Truth- 1 vote
Infinite-  0 votes


uppin for votes!

da_notorious_mack:
imma have to go with mo dizzle truth dint come as hard as usual and infinite had a nice verse but it took four bars before you even threw a punch and when the other two are on an all out offensive you cant afford to do that imo mo dizzle you suprised me here but you do need to cut the length of your bars and cut down on the foot notes...assumin no ones heard of the wwe is slightly patronizing lol


good battle vote dizzle

TraceOneInfinite:
that's three votes for Mo Dizzle.   

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