Author Topic: Revelation 23 (Read 178 times)

Dynamic · « **on:** September 17, 2006, 02:51:36 PM »

Blessed is he that readeth, and they that hear the words of this prophecy, and keep those things which are written therein: for the time is at hand...

It's not an addition to the testaments, just something i invested my essence in/
i've converted my personal questions into philisophical messages/
Witnessed entire regiments and there presidents tremble at my precence/
there guess is to shower me with presents and introduce their estiments/
but they were incorrect their elements didn't contain relevance/
i rejected their ideas so they threatened me with ailments/
i describe stories in vivid detailment/
My words alone would stop an entire army's prevailment/
often selfish, but no apologies cause i can't help it/
feelings no longer have meaning but at once i have felt it/
in the past my heart might have melted/
at the sight of the wealthy spitting on the helpless/
hospitals won't help the sick/
but the rich with a headache are treated quick/
lower class people are unbeliveable twits/
but a rich snobby bitch is a reliable snitch?/
it's a manaiacal twist of fate/
my lines define my once undefinable traits/
we should rely instead of hate, decide instead of debate/
yet question our head of state then our paths will be set straight/
This ain't a virtual reality more like a parallel galaxy/
we rally to support our troops that battle the Iraqi's/
we bomb their faculty's and kidnap their family's/
we turn a third would country into the type of disaster you only see in fantasy's/
Political figureheads use subliminal messages/
with minimal relevance to show revere for your president/
i don't blame the soldiers they only do what their ordered/
but forward to massive murder is an ungodly horror/
now we have to stay stationed in a place that now faces much altercation/
apparently liberation is the decimation of an entire nation/
many 911 calls were made on 9/11 when the trade center was assaulted/
we destroyed an entire country and still havn't nabbed the culprit/
it's a mystery that hasn't been solved yet/
we've bombed them, but i guess we won't be even until they're all dead/
apparently we bomb other country's in trouble/
but here poverty and robberies are still apart of the struggle/
the president turns his back on his country, and no one questions his cunning/
now that's something, we fight for our flag but won't fight for our people? that disgusts me/
you prayed every day but to no prevail
you go crazy and decend to hell because god didn't pay attention well/
religious pricks wonder why i'm atheist/
so i reply with a sigh "why did god create racists?"/
"why only on several occasions do the poor elevate to the famous"/
"even priests the holiest of chiefs violate a child's anus"/
these acts are heinous, from the white house to the church corruption reigns over us/
police detain us, lock us in chains, defame us like the pain of incarceration ain't enough/
i don't believe in a higher being that's all knowing and all seeing/
when he don't seem to care that people are being defeated by evil beings/
do i believe in buddha, jesus, heathens or demons/
someone is lying, which religion should i decide is right to believe in?/
people ask "then why do you use biblical terms when your spitting these words?"/
"because there the words from the past, so i must admit that i have learned/
that corruption runs back farther, war slaughter was started by our own forefathers/
times are getting harder every dawn drama get's as hot as a sauna/
so do i believe in myself like i believe in the need for water?
no time to trade lives, no time to barter/
so i'll rhyme untill the reaper won't allow me to speak any longer/
it'd be a cliche to say the worlds not in dismay/
but this way, future generations can see the attempts made/
from the west to the east, there's much contempt in the streets/
Revelation 23 is for generations to see that geniuses like me still believe in the word "peace"

DYNAMIC

Dynamic · « **Reply #1 on:** October 10, 2006, 02:52:46 PM »

I've written better but this is still one of my favorites

DYNAMIC

QuietTruth · « **Reply #2 on:** October 16, 2006, 03:19:37 PM »

Big vocab..nice.

Mo Z. Dizzle · « **Reply #3 on:** October 18, 2006, 03:08:59 PM »

while i don't agree with everything u said, that was extremely well written.

you have a large vocab like QuietTruth said and i enjoyed how you had a set of words to rhyme.