It's May 09, 2024, 05:52:25 AM
though the lines are pretty long, it flows really nice.
Nice stuff.
"For he/she has never tried has lost even before the battle has begun,"Yup, like someone telling a person without legs to run,Even dumb like winning the lottery and forgetting where you're from,Hung on comin' up will only lead problems to succumb and left the changed for undone.Thats why I'm blunt, this art allows me to hit the smallest of marks,Cause my poetic thoughts pause significant leaders in a deceiving vault as they come to a screeching halt.Find my words sharper than darts when my bark cuts through like that of a great white shark,I don't think its my fault when people read this and are lost for remarks,When its evident that my heart is the spark that lets you see in the dark.Part of the formula is being smart and the other being honest,So yes, I started writing a lot of poetry a few years before collegeI tried putting my poem in stanzas using Microsoft Office, but the website would not allow it.Anyway, I think poetry is a knowledge that can never be solved but may be tried with logic,Anonymous resolve to endless problems, while maintaining a consistant evolving symbolic project,But imma leave that alone for now and just speak some about the elegant beauty which you revolve with.Nirvana, your smile is like the smoothest flowing volcanic fires, An endless supply of radiant bliss that can be seen from miles.Shine brighter than a sapphire, A style in which many can desire but only few are luck enough to conspireCause only a liar wouldn't admire the beautiful essence you perspire.
Quote from: Sanford and Son - Suckaa Free 2006 on January 01, 2007, 03:20:04 AM"For he/she has never tried has lost even before the battle has begun,"Yup, like someone telling a person without legs to run,Even dumb like winning the lottery and forgetting where you're from,Hung on comin' up will only lead problems to succumb and left the changed for undone.Thats why I'm blunt, this art allows me to hit the smallest of marks,Cause my poetic thoughts pause significant leaders in a deceiving vault as they come to a screeching halt.Find my words sharper than darts when my bark cuts through like that of a great white shark,I don't think its my fault when people read this and are lost for remarks,When its evident that my heart is the spark that lets you see in the dark.Part of the formula is being smart and the other being honest,So yes, I started writing a lot of poetry a few years before collegeI tried putting my poem in stanzas using Microsoft Office, but the website would not allow it.Anyway, I think poetry is a knowledge that can never be solved but may be tried with logic,Anonymous resolve to endless problems, while maintaining a consistant evolving symbolic project,But imma leave that alone for now and just speak some about the elegant beauty which you revolve with.Nirvana, your smile is like the smoothest flowing volcanic fires, An endless supply of radiant bliss that can be seen from miles.Shine brighter than a sapphire, A style in which many can desire but only few are luck enough to conspireCause only a liar wouldn't admire the beautiful essence you perspire.really nice flow and some mataphors that were placed in the correct spot, not overdone. You ever think about spitting some of the shit you write over beats? Cuz you have some vicious rhymes..