Flash freestlye

[dj Hurricane]

am like a flash bang stunning your eyes like fat people looking at pies thinking about all the lies this world has told to emphasize it enough i gotta say it in BOLD am hip hop to a T they should make me into a mould like a ring after this freestyle gone all be saying CHACHING my future leans on a hinge is creaking squeaking give it some oil am as fresh as that all be jumping up the rap ladder like a cat or making people scared like a rat putting people on the mat. am pulling this freestyle out ma hat so a sat down this freestyle has had to many ups and downs 

what you think??