Author Topic: Flash  (Read 108 times)

dj Hurricane

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Flash
« on: November 30, 2007, 02:03:10 PM »
am like a flash bang stunning your eyes like fat people looking at pies thinking about all the lies this world has told to emphasize it enough i gotta say it in BOLD am hip hop to a T they should make me into a mould like a ring after this freestyle gone all be saying CHACHING my future leans on a hinge is creaking squeaking give it some oil am as fresh as that all be jumping up the rap ladder like a cat or making people scared like a rat putting people on the mat. am pulling this freestyle out ma hat so a sat down this freestyle has had to many ups and downs  8) 8)

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QuietTruth

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Re: Flash
« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2007, 05:45:31 PM »
You shouldn't not write it like a paragraph my dude. And when you say 'am', you mean 'I am', word?
 

dj Hurricane

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Re: Flash
« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2007, 07:48:12 AM »
yo thanks man first try lol sorry for 2 posts computer froze