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Sweet Pain (Dedication)

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'Illicit':
more or better wordplay for example. bein that your piece is called sweet pain and bein, if i got it right that is, in the end you come out and say sweet pain is what your definition of what love is, then you coulda made it more interesting by creating more metaphors and similes with certain lines you wrote.

Tha Psycho Hustla:
thanks.
what about others?
tell more.

Tha Psycho Hustla:
 :-[ no one else?

Tha Psycho Hustla:
 ???

Tha Psycho Hustla:
now fa real, nobody has to say somethin about it?

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