Author Topic: untouchable  (Read 216 times)

bez

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untouchable
« on: February 25, 2008, 10:23:29 AM »
I'll always be on top,
So hot I can't stop,
Aint rich, I wish I won that lottery jackpot,
So I could spend days happy,
Condo in Miami, swimmin in water so clear, glady,
Just me and myself, cos I dont need no greed,
Women that make a killin off feedin off me,
Thats the way its always been, but I never treat em mean,
Treat them too keen, but hell thats me,
But now I'm all closed, runnin out of elbows,
Cos only God knows why he delivers these gold (diggers),
Livin off my flows, but things done changed,
Im takin back everything, everything Ive said,
I love you, I miss you, long to kiss you, nope,
I hate you, degrate you, youve run out of hope,
haha... if only things were true,
Cos Im untouchable girl... just like you,
 

when it rains it pours

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Re: untouchable
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2008, 11:35:12 AM »
nigga you just got touched, and no not MJ or R Kelly style
just to let you know, you dont need money to make bitches smile
sound like a dummy tryin say u live off yo raps
shit sound straight garbage almost made me collapse
im from the state with the finest bitches and the sun stay out
got the pacific right next to us so we aint trippin off no droughts
palm trees, hollywood hoes, and the best dro
im talkin about california in case you aint know
 

Dreamz

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Re: untouchable
« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2008, 05:49:14 AM »
Caramel Complexion, i don't even know why you trying to diss Bez
he's got some talent, but dude your funny
 

when it rains it pours

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Re: untouchable
« Reply #3 on: February 27, 2008, 08:55:03 AM »
Caramel Complexion, i don't even know why you trying to diss Bez
he's got some talent, but dude your funny
im not dissing him at all, i think hes a cool dude, its a little battle, its all in fun
 

D-Reborn

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Re: untouchable
« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2008, 10:38:08 AM »
its aight, no disrespect but I know you can do it way much better, just take your time  8)

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