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Round 1: (W) Jookin vs. (L) Quiet Truth - JOOKIN DISQUALIFIED
Lunatic:
1-1 thus far
TraceOneInfinite:
--- Quote from: QuietTruth on July 15, 2008, 04:46:20 PM ---The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
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-weak opening and didn't make sense.. -3
-nice metaphor with the Hertz thing +1.5
-nother nice metaphor with "pke, but line preceding it was wack + 0
-Great metaphor with the telephone poll "lines" +3
-Clever finish, solid use of metaphor +3
Score= 4.5
Lunatic:
^so who u vote for infinite?
TraceOneInfinite:
--- Quote from: Lunatic 63 on July 17, 2008, 10:55:33 PM ---^so who u vote for infinite?
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I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.
Lunatic:
--- Quote from: Abdul-Infinite on July 18, 2008, 12:29:36 AM ---
--- Quote from: Lunatic 63 on July 17, 2008, 10:55:33 PM ---^so who u vote for infinite?
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I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.
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ahh, alright
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