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Round 1: (W) Jookin vs. (L) Quiet Truth - JOOKIN DISQUALIFIED

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Lunatic:
god damn i cant even vote both y'all KILLED IT :o

QuietTruth:

--- Quote from: Jookin247 on July 16, 2008, 12:42:19 AM ---
--- Quote from: QuietTruth on July 15, 2008, 04:46:20 PM ---The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D

--- End quote ---

you just ignorin that whole 8-12 bars thing huh? lol

--- End quote ---

Nah, he said 8-12 bars, not 8-12 lines. ;)

|JEM|ILL|:
Not quite sure if I'm allowed to vote or what, but whatever he's some centz...

QT

Lots of nice and original concepts, but the delivery is off... not to mention you did call yourself a "herb", i got the word play, but ain't that still a bad thing to be...fuck it? I dunno. Any way, it's still a solid verse a few tweaks and it'd be a killer verse. Keep spittin and elevatin. I was feelin the "hertz" line just you could reworded it to impact harder im sure.

Jook

You used classic and effective style of keystyle battling, setup-punch, and you had some dope punches, good personals, overall a dope verse.


Vote = Jook

Reason = He just hit harder, the punches were a lot stronger.


Keep elevatin... Good battle

QuietTruth:
Propz for votin'.

Fuck Your Existence:
both very solid drops,imma go QT on this one although it was a tough choice,his shit just stood out to me more

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