Author Topic: Round 1: (L) Job vs. (W) Lunatic (Read 437 times)

Lunatic · « **Reply #15 on:** July 17, 2008, 09:43:11 PM »

more votes please....

G-Funk · « **Reply #16 on:** July 17, 2008, 09:47:07 PM »

My vote goes to Lunatic.

Lunatic · « **Reply #17 on:** July 17, 2008, 09:52:08 PM »

3-1 for me

battle over. thanks to all who voted

This is my first ever battle Infinite

u said u needed records

1-0 is now my record

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **Reply #18 on:** July 19, 2008, 08:36:12 PM »

User "G Funk" and User "though death is callin" both had skeptical votes. Because they offered no explanation for their votes which makes it questionable whether they even took the time to read both verses.

But 1 of those "skeptical" votes went to Job, and 1 went to "Luna"... so I'm gonna go ahead and count both votes.

If the board was more active I would reject both votes, but right now we need all the votes we can get.

So it's official... Luna wins!

Luna- 3
Job- 1

Congratulations to Luna on his first victory at the forum I hope this is your first victory on your way to being in the Top 10 at the forum!

Lunatic · « **Reply #19 on:** July 19, 2008, 10:35:32 PM »

^thanks a lot infinite!

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **Reply #20 on:** July 19, 2008, 11:28:29 PM »

Quote from: Lord JOB on July 16, 2008, 12:17:57 PM

yo you aint a lunatic but you suck like the st.lunatics/
midwest swing ya fat ass moms to the sun
and cause a LUNAr eclipze/
Oh you like interviewin rappers come meet
these clipse/
They not from virginia , they from iraq
and dont speak english/
So you gonna to need a translator,
to tell you, we want the loot or
get mad holes in you and sleep with the fishes like sponge bob fool/
and fuck them niggas, that always vote NO-to-my-flow/
them niggas reading my shit with the comprehensive skills
of a 4 year old/
thats the reason why hip hop is in a deep ass hole/
just look at these clowns, that big up these weak ass
garbage flows/
they know nothing about the *TRUTH*,
so they should stay *QUIET* like they name
and disappear like lil zane/
retarded ass niggas biggin up papoose/
but papoose hasnt come out with one FUCKIN
record, so how stupid are you/
eye never overstood, how a nigga can win in a battle
when 90 percent of his flow wasnt even directed
at the nigga he was facing.........OOPPPPSSS/
and fuck this 8 to 12 bars/
aint no limits on me/
eye am a untamed beast the combination of
the hulk and king kong homie/
but unlike the original King kong
eye dont FUCK WITH WHITE BITCHS YA'll/
and eye love readin the daily obituaries, when its filled
with nothing but white people/
it brings joy to my heart, when they start to diminish as a people
because they fuckin evil............

FUCK THIS PLACE............THIS FAKE BATTLING SPOT.........EYE AM DONE WITH THIS BULLSHIT

SPOT FILLED WITH BULLSHIT NIGGAS WHO CANT FUCKIN JUDGE A BATTLE FOR SHIT............BUM ASS

NIGGAS.......... SHOUT OUT TO THE REAL NIGGAS THAT CAN SEE N FEEL A REAL FLOW..........

FUCKIN THIS CANDY SNAP ASS NIGGAS.......AND EYE AM OUT...............

Great wordplay in your opening and you get extra points for dissing the St. Lunatics- +5

Nice use of metaphor with your sponge Bob reference +2

You get points for respondin to people who have spoke out against your flow, you personalized this rhyme and developed your character which takes more skill than just droppin a series of metaphors +7

That was a clever subliminal about going over 8-12 bars, good use of humor +3

more creativity with the ill shit about white people, more character development +4

+5 for overall entertainment value of you talkin shit

score= 26

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **Reply #21 on:** July 19, 2008, 11:34:32 PM »

Quote from: Lunatic 63 on July 15, 2008, 09:20:53 PM

key style needed to get rid of ya ass,
real quick and fuckin fast,
so Infinite called me in for the "JOB"
one man spitter but im feelin like a MOB
of people attackin you at the head
after this battle, ya key style career dead
so back to the g-spot and argue with a white
your battle record brutal, you aint winnin this fight
i see ya avatar with a man holdin a shotty
i dead u in this battle and then dump ya body
u attemptin to fight me is like goin at the "LORD"
thats like committin suicide, wrap ya neck around the cord
so your really just deadin yourself
Infinite, I won, now hand me the belt

solid opening and wordplay and speakin to the situation + 3

solid personal disses bout endin his carear and sendin him back to g-spot + 4

average finish + 2

+4 bonus points for keepin it 8-12 bars when Job didn't

score = 13