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ROUND 1: (L) Lyrical-Poet vs. (W) Weezy

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Lyrical-Poet:
yo..
this boy's a kid on tha net cause he cant get his respect, he aint nothin in his prime
he buggin cause he cant shine, so ima stick this pussy like i was drunk out'a my mind
when you fuckin up its fine, you 'a vehicular car crash
your bars aint never armstrong like testicular by-pass
i figure you been wack, but this homie is cheery
you jus' cover'n up pain, but its only a theory
your clearly a nut case, mearly a scrub when tha right scenery comes
your evolution of rap is unexplaind thats why your theoryz a bust
good god..his mission is unlucky wit'a vision thats rusty
like tiny green plants in tha brush, jus' stick to tha country
You been battlin nobodies now the stage is beein shared
 With a rapper that takes ya breath away, how you supposed to breathe with no air?

ωεεźγ ғ:
Grip your pens firmly, my ink'll start a tsunami
I am glad you got yourself a gun, cause i got myself an army
Blam, Blam, dark tunnel, bright light, welcome to the dead poets society
God damn! you NASty wanabees need to B.I.G up to your papi
My hypothesis is that if you God's son, then God i be
Caught in a plight, my son your theories are that of a dead man, aight
And i feel as alive as floyd at a mayweather fight
Silly mortals, out of your world, i don't breathe no air
Brought a knife to this fist fight, damn right i don't play fair
Sucha simple verse, still you neil armstrong niggers could not reach me with a spaceship from Nasa
Let the final shots ring through everyones ears, Dubc is mi casa

Dreamz:
Poet- your verse was good, couple of hit nothing great tho. smiple, you just gotta elevate you know

Wezzy- your was also not the best, but not the worst, also smiple, good punches thou.

i would call it a tie, but that lance armstrong line had me going
also did the jordon sparks line ,

so vote- Lyrical-Poet

props wezzy good battle 

QuietTruth:
Yeah, both ya'll spit close and similar ways but I was feeling Lyrical-Poet's flow more, so Lyrical-Poet.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: Lyrical-Poet on July 21, 2008, 06:53:14 AM ---yo..
this boy's a kid on tha net cause he cant get his respect, he aint nothin in his prime
he buggin cause he cant shine, so ima stick this pussy like i was drunk out'a my mind
when you fuckin up its fine, you 'a vehicular car crash
your bars aint never armstrong like testicular by-pass
i figure you been wack, but this homie is cheery
you jus' cover'n up pain, but its only a theory
your clearly a nut case, mearly a scrub when tha right scenery comes
your evolution of rap is unexplaind thats why your theoryz a bust
good god..his mission is unlucky wit'a vision thats rusty
like tiny green plants in tha brush, jus' stick to tha country
You been battlin nobodies now the stage is beein shared
 With a rapper that takes ya breath away, how you supposed to breathe with no air?



--- End quote ---

Everything you spit was solid... there were no weak lines but at the same time I didn't see anything that stands out, or any character development or character destruction of your opponent... just a regular verse.. I'd like to see u put more of yur heart in the next one....

score + 10

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