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DJ_Jay_Deee:
You got a dope flow homie. The first song has some deep lyrics. I like the song I-Bo produced.

Overall dope songs.

Now_Im_Not_Banned:
hmmmm...Let me give u some honest constructive criticism, homie...You have a dope voice...You sound like a mixture between E-40 and Too Short...I can tell it's not your original voice, but whatever you're doing with your voice, it's tight...Now, about your flow...You need to work on that...If u worked on your flow, you could be an amazing MC...Your biggest problem seems to be that you tend to go off beat a lot...Other than that, it's all coo...Oh, and also, when u double-layer your verses, u dont do it exact, and sometimes it makes it sound bad... like an echo or something...PeAcE

Smooth:

--- Quote ---thanx 4 ure feedbac & time SMOOTH.....
is STAYIN CLOAKED (the 2nd 1)
ure fav outta all the trax?
--- End quote ---


Yeah homie the 2nd was mos def my favourite... the third track I was mad feelin to... the last track I wasn't feelin as much... possibly cause you flowed a lil slower...

Peace

Gate Won:
JAY DEE:
thanx 4 the props folks
i try 2 be original in every aspect of this shit...
and bring summn different
2 the table than what u normally hear

SMOOTH:
coo shit...
i hope u like what else i have 2 offer.....

SCCIT:
i hear i sound like a lotta different ways...
from different people.....
but it is my real voice........
as far as the flow.....
with the echoing.....
(sum1 also mentioned it b4 on another post)
i DO do that 2 accent sum words so they stik n ure skull
so it connects with what im talkin bout in the next line
sumtimes.....so thats not on accident
(and that will be way differently fit in
once the final product is ready)
BUT i noticed that on the 1st verse of MAKE IT OUT
(the 1st part on the snippet)
that it does that as well.....
that MIGHT be due it not being put 2gether right
b4 i made files 2 listen 2...
otherwise i dont see what ure saying.....
everything seems overdubbed
right 2 me besides that....
(like the rest of the verses on that song & others)

then again who knows?
i mighta fuked up & inhaled 2 much smoke
in the studio & recorded it off beat....
i did 3 whole songs
(2 full songs and 2 songs with 1 verse and choruses)
in like 45 minutes........
the point im trying 2 make here......
is that ANYTHING u hear like that on the these files.....
will be taken care of when i take all my ADATS
2 the studio 4 mixing & mastering....
ANYTHING like that WILL be fixed b4 i ever go 2 press
if it means recording that verse over while im there
thats the kinda feedbac people need 2 get better tho
and no1s above gettin better & better so i thank u 4 ure reply

Gate Won:
dam...i typed like a books worth 4 nuthin
lmao

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