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confusion remix
jay:
bump
AlerG:
personally i like the original better...the vocals are much clearer and easier to understand...the beat is more simple but not better or worse than the remix...i still feel the third verse is a little much when you say shit like:
"Shit, I love her too death/
Just wanna fuck her in bed/
and Im a sucker for head/
But sex is not all, I really wanna get too know her/
God let me show her/
I can get her wet while sober/
She erects my boner/"
you make a serious song for the most part and then i feel it's thrown away when some immature comments are made in the wrong place...that's just my opinion though...
also, in the remix the second chorus sounds shitty, peace.
+[=PHI@SK0=]+:
ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
Now_Im_Not_Banned:
--- Quote ---+ link=board=thalab;num=1026850367;start=0#17 date=07/25/02 at 16:19:33]ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
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Naah, Ive done much better...Trust me...This shit is 6 months old...
By The way, the Jsteez Diss sucked ass...I dont even know how u can say thats near my best...
Now_Im_Not_Banned:
--- Quote ---+ link=board=thalab;num=1026850367;start=0#17 date=07/25/02 at 16:19:33]ay well, the first one is better as far as like how the words match the beat, especially the chorus ! but the remix has the bomb ass beat. Ay sccit man, in full honestly, your a better singer than a rapper i think. I've never heard you try to do a chorus like that, but like that sounded pretty damn talented, especially the part where you go MY MIIIIIND! and then the second time the chorus comes around when your layering your voice to echo the lyrics, that was really tyte. As far as the rappin', I've heard better from you. I thinkt he best I've heard you rappin' was on the Middle Eastern track and on the Jsteez Diss
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and I think its bullshit that u think im a better "singer"...You obviously think Im some sort of half-ass whack rapper, cuz i can tell by the way you speak, and your judging this old ass shit...I know I could be a real good rapper, Im just stressed out, with acid pro and everything...Get me into a real studio and I'll show u what I can do...This online, computer mic bullshit is just some shit I do for fun, and plus I just started rapping...Trust me, Ill get better, a LOT better...PeAcE
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