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ROCCY SCCIT RAPQUAKE- Sccit Style In Yo Azz
RAPQUAKE:
yo first off sccit only writes fo' roccy...i write ma own shit, i know it aint too dope but i never practice or pride myself on my lyrics much, maybe i need more practice...
and maybe i should freestyle more too i jus do it on rare occasions
yeah like sccit said though we didnt put much effort on dis song cuz it was originally on ly gonna be on ROCCY's album, lol jk dude...but yea it was only supposed to be "stupid funny" and not really some "heat", but ppl think its cool so watever,
thnx fo the criticism tho DOGG
ROCCY:
Yo, Jsteez im 100% with u homie, I cant belive what a fucking dumb ass I Was to have him write for me, when I can do it my self, and I am off beat and """SHAKEY"""" lol because Im reading the rhymes right there, I never seen thm before in my life, so its kinda hard for me to flow to the beat when u are rapping lyrics you've never seen before, but its over now, Im gonn write my whole album, Except like 1-2 songs that hes already written for me......peace
Now_Im_Not_Banned:
JSteez, first off, Im sure your not familiar with any of the NWA albums (which every Hip Hop Head should own)...Ice Cube wrote the lyrics for Eazy E and Dr Dre, and in a couple of songs you can hear Eazy E saying "Ice Cube writes the rhymes that I say" and shit like that. So its not stupid at all, unless u wanna call two of the greatest rappers (Dre and Eazy E) stupid...Its all NWA Inspired when roccy says that shit...
Second off, I know my verse is not good, cuz as Roccy knows, I didnt put ANY time into it, since he was right next to me when I recorded it, I did it in 5 minutes max...
ALSO, Roccy...thats ONLY JSteezes opinion that you sound "shaky" or whatever he says, but I think your verse is good...Not bad at all. As you can tell, Jsteez loves giving criticism. He doesnt realize that we dont have professianal equipment (yet) like he does and that we do this shit with a cheap 2 dollar mic which is almost impossible too record with...If this was done in a studio it would be great, but it wasnt, and Jsteez is rating it as if it was done in a studio...But still, people liked this track, as effortless as it was, I mean 73 on the charts? Come on, you gotta admit thats good, especially since MP3.com is a HUGE ass site worldwide...
But thanks for the criticism anyways...
Doggystylin:
LMAO, funny ass track.....
hes my criticism
roccy, your just flowin like it aint no thang n its the tone u talk to your mama in the mornings, put more emotion n heart into it
nik i dunno, your flow was weird, lol, but i guess you gotta try different styles to see what fits you
rapquake, your shit is played out, come with somethin entertaining, your delevery can use some work
and im out
RAPQUAKE:
--- Quote ---LMAO, funny ass track.....
hes my criticism
roccy, your just flowin like it aint no thang n its the tone u talk to your mama in the mornings, put more emotion n heart into it
nik i dunno, your flow was weird, lol, but i guess you gotta try different styles to see what fits you
rapquake, your shit is played out, come with somethin entertaining, your delevery can use some work
and im out
--- End quote ---
hah i dont need ur faggot ass givin ME opinions nigga think before u speak, peace.
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