Author Topic: Just some shit i wrote in school today,.. check  (Read 954 times)

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Re: Just some shit i wrote in school today,.. chec
« Reply #15 on: September 28, 2002, 07:38:37 AM »
thats hellza nice, cuz i mean he was spittin on one topic and he never flew off like i always do, lol, and plus each line just fit into the next, props
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Re: Just some shit i wrote in school today,.. chec
« Reply #16 on: September 28, 2002, 09:35:44 PM »
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All the people in my class only listen to rock
Aint no homie on my block listenin to HipHop


kinda sounds familiar lol.  

but yeh for a 1st overall rhyme this was very good! keep that up, maybe you'll grow some interest in spittin more often and then start kickin ass around here lol, who knows.

aight, peace
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