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da_notorious_mack:
Imma take this dogg 4 a walk thru the streets of D~//
who knos what hell see~betta hope he dont make no enemies~//
Cus homies from D is playin 4 keeps~//
kill ya in front of ya peeps~til ya bloOd seeps~//
onto the city streets~and this kid thought he was ELITE~//
now u tastin defeat~and i aint takin bout toes~//
im talkin bout the chrome set to xplode on you homes~//
dont reply alone~cus my homies in the cut~//
u lyin to sluts~i bet ya sister raped ya wit a strap on~//
bet u scared to take ya gal home~incase pink trys ta get her mack on~//{the girl a dike right?]
dont slack son~the bell aint rung~but plz believe the title mine b4 the last bar is sung~//
i get to the point like pencils~any my lyrics drop like anvils~//
and pink so fat if she was in times square,it would come to a standstill~//[omg]

I AINT READY YET!


SOON

Gay-o Felony:

--- Quote ---Imma take this dogg 4 a walk thru the streets of D~//
who knos what hell see~betta hope he dont make no enemies~//
Cus homies from D is playin 4 keeps~//
kill ya in front of ya peeps~til ya bloOd seeps~//
onto the city streets~and this kid thought he was ELITE~//
now u tastin defeat~and i aint takin bout toes~//
im talkin bout the chrome set to xplode on you homes~//
dont reply alone~cus my homies in the cut~//
u lyin to sluts~i bet ya sister raped ya wit a strap on~//
bet u scared to take ya gal home~incase pink trys ta get her mack on~//{the girl a dike right?]
dont slack son~the bell aint rung~but plz believe the title mine b4 the last bar is sung~//
i get to the point like pencils~any my lyrics drop like anvils~//
and pink so fat if she was in times square,it would come to a standstill~//[omg]

I AINT READY YET!


SOON


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^^ I liked that dawg.. nice and to tha point.. lol..

I thought the multi's were good, could of expanded a lil mo tho.. but it was tight!

I liked these lines:


--- Quote ---
i get to the point like pencils~any my lyrics drop like anvils~//
and pink so fat if she was in times square,it would come to a standstill~//

--- End quote ---


^^ I thought that was creative, and was funny.. coz she a bit tubby round the belly!


--- Quote ---
u lyin to sluts~i bet ya sister raped ya wit a strap on~//
bet u scared to take ya gal home~incase pink trys ta get her mack on~//{the girl a dike right?]

--- End quote ---


^^ That was nice! keep it up dawg!
Ayo.. peep this ya'll give my homie some feedback here!

Indecisive! :)

:-:Mistah Menace:-::
Imma take this dogg 4 a walk thru the streets of D~//
who knos what hell see~betta hope he dont make no enemies~//
Cus homies from D is playin 4 keeps~//
kill ya in front of ya peeps~til ya bloOd seeps~//
onto the city streets~and this kid thought he was ELITE~//
now u tastin defeat~and i aint takin bout toes~//
im talkin bout the chrome set to xplode on you homes~//
dont reply alone~cus my homies in the cut~//
u lyin to sluts~i bet ya sister raped ya wit a strap on~//
bet u scared to take ya gal home~incase pink trys ta get her mack on~//{the girl a dike right?]
dont slack son~the bell aint rung~but plz believe the title mine b4 the last bar is sung~//
i get to the point like pencils~any my lyrics drop like anvils~//
and pink so fat if she was in times square,it would come to a standstill~//[omg]

^^ - i like this ish u dropped mack, creative, like indy said it was straight to the point,


i get to the point like pencils~any my lyrics drop like anvils~//
and pink so fat if she was in times square,it would come to a standstill~// , lmao tight...

keep droppin,
peace

Reef:
Tight shit .. Them barz about Pink - i was feelin em,

'dont reply alone~cus my homies in the cut~//
u lyin to sluts~i bet ya sister raped ya wit a strap on~//
bet u scared to take ya gal home~incase pink trys ta get her mack on~//'

^ they were also some tight barz... Keep it up..

peace

M Dogg™:
Hum... this is how peoples die on this board.

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