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I Still Love H.E.R.

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M Dogg™:

--- Quote from: El the Self Image on October 01, 2008, 10:39:38 AM ---^
DAMN, ROUGH CROWD.....

I thought it was interesting man, some of the odd bars seemed a little too long though, you may need to re-phrase some stuff if you ever decide to record this....

but, it does read like a remake of a Common verse, which, if you were going for that, then you accomplished it well.
If not, then do something to seperate yourself from the originator of the concept.... other than that, I enjoyed reading it!

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I was trying for it. I was thinking of even using the same beat. I might rewrite it, it's the first song I wrote in about 3 years. If I did I would add a 3rd verse about Hip-Hop's death.

El the Self Image:
Hip-Hop never died my friend, just went into a coma for a while....

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