Please rate.....BRAVE SPIRITS by BEZ

[bez]

Brave Spirits by Bez

(Chorus) Fear aint an option, but yet we all feel,
Scared stiff we get, cos this shits real,
But we look for courage, as we break the outter limits,
We know we get through, cos we are brave spirits,

So what next for Bez, yeah I've been wonderin,
Alot of shit goin down, I'm kind of hurtin,
My mind going crazy, wanna escape the pain,
Such a shame when you think of the knowledge inside my brain,
I cant function, correctly livin the way I am,
Stress at home, stress at college maybe a shouldent give a dam,
But yo I'm real and I'll tell it the way it is,
Feel like cryin, but I can't and I duno what gives,
Been thinkin alot lately, about runnin away,
My problems wont be solved, they'll just be hidden til another day,
I can't sleep, cos I'm doin so much thinkin,
Sick of losin, its about time I started winnin,
Ya'll feel me,

(Chorus) Fear aint an option, but yet we all feel,
Scared stiff we get, cos this shits real,
But we look for courage, as we break the outter limits,
We know we get through, cos we are brave spirits,

So alot of times in life, you will go through hell,
Commit crimes a few times end up livin in a cell,
Just look deep, try to find those brave spirits,
Relax your mind from time to time even fo a couple minutes,
Things should improve just believe in yourself,
Stay off the drink and drugs think about your health,
Take things slow and easy, not in 1 big leap,
Do shit by the book, dont be a crook or creap,
Cos we all know that life can be full of shit,
But at least you can say you experienced it,
Unlike me, ha I'm just a boy with dreams,
Dreams of what, dam dreams of bigger things,
Brave spirits,

(Chorus) Fear aint an option, but yet we all feel,
Scared stiff we get, cos this shits real,
But we look for courage, as we break the outter limits,
We know we get through, cos we are brave spirits,

So try gettin through that deadly black hole,
Set yourself a target and dont stop til you reach the goal,
Cos life should have absolutely no limits,
You wanna be somit just belive in your spirits,
Stay strong don't do wrong always be true to you,
You'll be amazed what you can achieve and what your mind can do,
I can see your powerful your a leader to the people,
Try to dodge gangsta's and thugs cos they are so leathal,
You gotta make it big, live a life of luxery,
You don't see Bez being a kurupt MC,
I got here on my own and I will always be here,
In spirit, cos the day I die is growin near,
Brave spirits babie,

(Chorus) Fear aint an option, but yet we all feel,
Scared stiff we get, cos this shits real,
But we look for courage, as we break the outter limits,
We know we get through, cos we are brave spirits,

(Chorus) Fear aint an option, but yet we all feel,
Scared stiff we get, cos this shits real,
But we look for courage, as we break the outter limits,
We know we get through, cos we are brave spirits,

[Hittman]

Like I said before, you don't drop complex rhyme but you have a good scheme and most of your verses are structured on dope content. Good shit .... your style would fit as an audio rhymer.

Shame your a scouser  

[bez]

thanks man, thats the way I like my rhymes to be, plain and simple so people understand them if you get me. Much appreciate the feedback.

[Reef]

Like I said before, you don't drop complex rhyme but you have a good scheme and most of your verses are structured on dope content. Good shit .... your style would fit as an audio rhymer.

Shame your a scouser  

Couldnt have put it better.. I like reading your shit.. keep droppin it..

[Smooth]

Dope rhyme... most of your shit is tight... I like the way you did the chorus...

[bLaDe]

tight piece

 -{bLaDe}