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Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit:
Hey ya'll here my freestyle, and i want ya'll to tell me what you think of it..!


Simplistic, canabalistic, spittin shit quicker, than the 900 tony hawk trick//  Flowin like a ball on a chain// Need to time to rest, just maintain// My style on the rocks with the oceans collidin// The illest of tha newbies, all tha rest are slippin an slidin// Explicit to the end of your reign// My temper is short, i should sit, back, listen to a track an refrain// All the beef goin on down here// People dishin out threats, an causin no fear// Rember remember people with a loose cannon// Wait till your asked to interfere, you just a plastic handgun// Not qualified to be classed as dangerous// My disease will spread an cause infection, its contagous// Expect no less from the technilistic, of the realist, an the illest// The newbie with an ichy trigger finga// Tha leader of the newest newbies, with a brain thats bigger// Raps gotta flow, if not, then hit the road// Dont stand a chance, not worth beein born// Sit down, respect Explicit, or your be dead in the gutter, with your family on the side line, starting to mourn// Infectious, poisonous ryhmes, melt you down to tha ground, like a vamp in the day, afraid of the sun shine// Placing you in a house of thugs// No where to escape, filled with fear, cant hide under the rugs// Unless you think that you like a four leaf clova// As rare as a diamond, only you can get trod on and walked ova//


So what ya'll think...?


Peace -- Explicit


( The illest of the NEWBIES)

IEMOE909:
THE POTENTIAL IS THERE. WORK ON KEEPING A PATTERN.AND ALL ELSE WILL COME TOGETHER

Pillow:
it was to jumbbled, and made no sense....

Entreri117:
I disagree with Tin...this rhyme was hot.  Nice shit Explicit...keep doin ya thang homie!

Reef:
Not bad, best ive seen of your billions of rhymes u made me read..lol keep goin dawg

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