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KS-Criminal >vs< Rhym_Tym_69.....post verses here!

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Rhym_Tym_69:
Yeah i felt that too. Guess i got lazy eh?  ;D

Rhym_Tym_69:
hey 'ks' change the title and add "open for votes" man..  

.:thE windtalkEr:.:
aiight ima vote if its counted


-----------------------kscriminal-------------------------
one hellofa dope ryme!!
great use of punches an the flow was also up to tha mark!
u clould have worked the punches out better.it could have added that panache to ur rhyme(i aint saying the punches an disses aint bad).
the style wuz in there too.!


memorable lines:

--- Quote ---Rape ya verse cause im da ‘Best of Both Worlds' and u NoT even ill-in-text/
This bitch will catch a quick loss and feel the punches cuz they look-soft
And theres always 2 ‘sides' to a story but which side ya wanna get pushed off
My ratio of opponents, rapery inevitable u shouldnt have come in/

--- End quote ---

ps u cld have left out tht lovemakin shit(my opinion)no offence!!



-------------------rhym tym 69-----------------------

impressive ryme u got there!!
i was expectin a little less than this.
but hats off to rhym time 69 for his ryme!.
real ill flow!
the multiz made ur ryme even more effective.
but ur punches werent upto the mark of the standard u ryming at.ks's were bettah i feel.

memorable lines:

--- Quote ---Im am an unstoppable power~, My flows fall like a meteor shower~, and ks criminal u juss a lyrical error~~  
imma threat to the world~, Ill make your brain swirl~, Ill take you out because i am the great lyricists slayer~~.
--- End quote ---


ps:u could have left out the last bar an the yin an yan thing
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vote=ks criminal

M Dogg™:
Rhym_Tym_69 seemed to have the advantage here. His rhymes were more on point, were's as KS seemed to just have a few good hits, and then after that was feelers.

Vote=Rhym_Tye_69

Vigilante:
1-2 uppin! >:(

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