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..::Pillow::.. vs. REL..... VOTE!!!!!

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M Dogg™:
Last time, I was kinda tired, but I read through both, and I was really feeling Pillow, but REL seemed to have better structure, and had better lyrics. But Pillow to me was better because it made more sense, but, since REL seemed o have more skillz, I gave it to him. That wasn't really fair, so now I am able to give a full review after some sleep and a class, so I'm a wake.

REL... great rhyming, and great punchlines. This was a good battle rhyme, stumbled at time in terms of flow, but didn't urt too much.

Strong points, hard hitting lyrics, and actual structure.
Bestline:

--- Quote ---And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//
--- End quote ---


Weak points, some "feeler" lines, as it seems they were put up there to feel up space. Everyone does it, but it does hurt.
Weak line:

--- Quote ---Your defenseless, like BUSTA, I break yo bones//
And I eat ur ass like ice-cream cones//
--- End quote ---


.::Pillow::., This wasn't a rhyme full of punchlines, which is what people like nowadays. But this was a good battle rap, eachline it seemed set up each other. Pillow, it seems that you have skillz, but this boards voters like more punches, trust me, I have to change styles 'cause of this.

Stong point, good rhyme, more of a rap as oppose to straight punches, but like Ali, if this was boxing, it'd be great dancing...LOL
Best line:

--- Quote ---They call me that cold child, aint like tha rest ah ya cuz i got my own style/  
Let my actions speak for my words otherwise keep a low profile/
--- End quote ---

(remember this, 'cause I feel it's a good thing)

Weak points, kept back on some punches, and even for a regular rap, needs more punchlines.

Weak lines:

--- Quote ---I gotta get down for what it is that i know/  
Show bizz is tha show but fuck tha fame, im about that fortune competition gets scorched and im sippin on 4 - 0/
--- End quote ---

(watch those uneven lines)

With this being all said the vote goes to............ by the score or............ 4.1-4.0............. I think Pillow had a better rap, so with my vote, I'ma give it to Pillow. It's my vote, but watch out 'cause other voters are a little bit more picky. I do like raps better though.

ROCCY:

--- Quote ---
please explain tht one.coz its like ur first post an u vote for sum battle w/out an intro damn.

---------------------------REL----------------------------
tigh shit from u there.
ill flow
consistent ryme scheme
dope shit!!
neat punchlines et al.

memorabel lines:
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pillow:
the first ive ever seen from u.
but it lacked overall cinsistency an weak punchlines ,theres a lotta room for improvemnt.

memorable lines:

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vote=REL

PZ
--- End quote ---



A Vote is a Vote..and he said ' pillow won that one'dont u think hes voting for pillow? LoL?

.:R-E-L:.:
3-3



VOTES!

Pillow:
yo REL go a little slower through the bored and u will see its my 3 votes, just in case u didnt see. so its 3-2 me
and thanks for re voting M. i appriciate it and thanks for the vote. i will take ur advice about the punchlines
peace out

..::Pillow::..

.:R-E-L:.:
naaah.....

i got votes by:Timelock, PimpFemcee, & Windtalker....


thats 3 homie....


3-3, VOTES!

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