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My Life story peeeeeeeeep.......and rate it.....

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PimpFemcEE:

--- Quote ---yo tight shit...i loved tha storytelling yo...

consider starting rappin ....rate 8\10
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:-*  ;D

Tanjential:
yo why was i edited? I'm with king suge on this...good content but weak rhyme structure,wordplay and mediocre rhythm,peace-Tanjint

NoT:
Nice piece, girl. That was real and from the heart, I wish I could do shit like that. Me, I've basically concluded that I'm a battle rapper and I can't do much more than "beating-chest" shit. Whenever I try to do shit that's deep (see: "Nick of Time - 'Faust Us'") it comes-off lame. Anyway, I gotta give props where they're due. This one gets you a solid 7.6/10 in my book (keep in mind that anything over 7 is pretty dope and anything over 8 is excellent). Nice work. :)

Pillow:
LMAO at dougg jones. similies took a piss on it HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAH

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