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WATAAHH Title Match: ToNe1904 ~vs.~ Illicit VOTES!

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ToNe1904:
damn mah bad man, ima hafta spit tomorrow after work. peace

ToNe1904:
~Tha champ enters tha ring....Illicit pisses on himself~  ;D


Once again itz tha "cat" ive killed since birth, you was BORN-SCARRED cus i "beat up this pussy" so many times i feel like a PORN-STAR/
Yur favorite teamz tha Celtics cus like them u aint WON-SHIT-IN-YEARS when i spray this lyrikal mase in yah eyes to leave this DUMB-BITCH-IN-TEARS/
Whoeva heard of a 6 month HAS-BEEN? Outta "breath" when ToNe came in BLASTIN and left Illicit GASPIN/
Said "Rappin's easy as breathin", well get yah OXYGEN cus this muthafucka LOST-AGAIN, itz "Judgement Day" and u bout to pay tha COST-FAH-SINS/
Yur punishment? Eternally burnt by tha "SPITTIN-DEVIL", i could kill u wit keystyle cus u still on a PREWRITTEN-LEVEL/
Illicit tha "Lyrical Razor Ruddock", exactly tha same, got fame and made a name by losin to "greatz" in tha game/
Wrote wit multis once, but u was SUCKIN-SO-BAD couldnt switch back to yah old style, yah lost yur FUCKIN-VOCAB/
Ive beat u 3-IN-A-ROW, wet up yur verse when i PEE-ON-YAH-FLOW, best way to get paid wit yah lips is by BEIN-A-HO/
Thinkin u "Too $hort" by tellin "COCK-TAILS", but yur stories come frum JOCKIN-MALES like bein LOCKED-IN-JAIL/
Became "Illicit" frum "CeeRide" because u "not ALLOWED"-TO-BE-"GANGSTA", on ToNes jock is yah motto, once again u BOWED-TO-ME-THANK-YAH/
You still come wit lil GEEZY-SPITS and couldnt be "sick" if u squirted frum EAZY'S-DICK, guess yah "childish ass" mussa starred in R. Kelly's SLEEZY-FLICKS/
Tha record stands 3-TO-1, ill make it 4 and DEFEAT-THIS-BUM bring yah crew, i RIP-THA-WACK-NERDS/
How many wins against ToNe?? couldnt "caP(cop)-2" if u was "2-Pac" WRITTIN-BACKWARDZ/


aiight....fukit, start tha votin yall!

good shit Illicit, no need tah say it....but no beef homie.

M Dogg™:
Damn, this was too close to call. I figured that it would be close and it is. Gotta give a full review.

Illicit

Strong points: Hardness was up, and intecity was also there. I noticed that you used a lot of metiphors, and besides hitting on ToNe, you elevated youself in you lyrics.
Best Lines:

--- Quote ---still questioning how you got the title without gettin caught I wrote ya shit/
I want compensation for wastin my time on this rhyme for this fag I'll make my bitch/
your bout as real as lies in church, I'm blessed with spitten since given birth/
physically beat you on ya own turf, remain mentally disturbed on god's earth/
--- End quote ---


Weak points: Had some let up moments, and let up a bit, but it didn't hurt you too much.

score=4.65

ToNe1904

Strong points: Had lots of hard hitting shit, and came with the attack. Like the fact you brought up your records. The CeeRider to Illicit was great, had my going.

Best Lines:

--- Quote ---Once again itz tha "cat" ive killed since birth, you was BORN-SCARRED cus i "beat up this pussy" so many times i feel like a PORN-STAR/

Became "Illicit" frum "CeeRide" because u "not ALLOWED"-TO-BE-"GANGSTA", on ToNes jock is yah motto, once again u BOWED-TO-ME-THANK-YAH/
--- End quote ---


Weak points: Mentioned the record too much, say is what have you done for me lately. Some punchlines don't land, but all and all, a very solid verse.

Score= 4.6

Illicit= 4.65
ToNe1904= 4.6

I thought both were about equal, harding rhymes. I think ToNe had alittle advantage for spitting first. But Illicit had more considentsy with his punches, and then danced with his boosted. ToNe went for the hay makers and missed a few times, but landed great shots. But because Illicit was dancing, it was hard to hit with a solid blow...

Vote=Illicit

Hittman:
A Very Good Battle, Very Close Aswell. Two Different Styles Clashed Here, And That Only Adds To How Hard It Is Too Vote. Illict Your Lines Were Coming At Me From Off The Screen, They Hit Hard And Some Were Pretty Complex. ToNe1904 Had The Better Punches Though, And Them Blazing Multis Slightly Clinched It For Him.

Vote - ToNe1904

Very Good Battle. Both Deserve The Title./

Smooth:
First off Dope battle, i liked both of your guys shit... but ima have to go with ToNe... i liked the way his flowed just a little bit more...

Peace

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