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VOTES~SCY AN DA_N_MACK VS WINDTALKER AN M DOGG~

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'Illicit':
aight review:

windtalker: no offense man, I noticed you gettin better n all, but in your lil 4 bar rhymes up there it seemed like you only concentrated on makin the last word rhyme, hence some of them cyphers turned out a lil dull. there were good ones in it, but for example:  
--- Quote ---SCY u ryme even worse than a pig/
in this game u think ur big?/
an u think tht ur rymes cause a gig?/

--- End quote ---

this really isnt a punchline.  keep at that more,  although still I noticed the effort, good shit man.

M Dogg:
nice short rhyme, good lines. not the very best, but above average of course.

Rating: windtalker: 3 / 5          M Dogg:  4/5

= 7 / 10




Mack:
now this shit was blazin, hot. nuthin left to say.

SCY:
I dunno I saw better shit from you before seemed you didnt wanna do this. kinda average verse. you can do better. keep it up

Rating: Mack:  4.5 / 5            SCY:  3.5 / 5

= 8 / 10


vote: Mack and SCY


like I said no offense windtalker, your a cool guy and just keep battlin.

peace

M Dogg™:
Any more. The short rhyme was because I wrote it the same day as my battle with bLaDe, and so I tried to use as much as I could there, but at the sametime come correct here. But anways,

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