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da_notorious_mack:
yo dere woz 2 much shit on da last post so i fink we shud jus start a new topic ,usual rules,ill spit 1st as da challenger

HBKid_Jr:
comin straight outta queensboro,  we goin do this shit my world//
i got u lost in my lyrical wirlwind swirl,  u goin end up like daniel pearl//
imma about tha committ tha lyrical rat-tat-tat,  my tounge be tha automatic strap//
how dare u call that crap rap,  imma smoke u like crack leavin 2 in ur back//
tha newbie noutourious wack,  hungry like scoobie//
but u got smoked like a doobie//
goin find your deceased corpse covered in doo//
yo dun u fuckin wit tha beast from tha east living phat like ed lover,  dont fuck wit me cuz death is permanent like a tattoo//
u dont deserve tha title of light weight champ//
u got tha nerve to challenge me to a fight,  shit like that make me irate,  u goin be another dead tramp//
first i spilt open your head like its a dutch,  fill it up wit a bullet,  that will be tha chronic//
i get simulated like a clit thinkin of u dead,  i dont need much jus my skill 2 kill u fuckin wit a phsycotic//
thinkin u like big callin yoself notorious//
but u gettin killed like ice t did 2 tha pigs my methods may be inglorious but imma end up victorious//
if u dont wanna get smoked like reefer//
i recomend not fuckin wit tha wcc's official grim reeper

da_notorious_mack:
I'm takin-this-place, Notorious stays "raisin-the-stakes"/
By blazin-the-states, grabbin 187's neck n' "makin-it-break"/
Rip him amazin-with-grace, when I'm "breakin-his-face"/
Battlin' me's a fatal-mistake/, Cause I'm "cagin'-this-nation"/
Tom packs more fudge then Keeblers elves "takin'-vacations"

I'm catchin-a-mill, like wind in da "depths-of-the-hills"/
Put holes in ya clicks's brain like i shot it with "extacy-pills"/
You know I'll crush 187's dental, throw punches to "stun-his-pencil"/
I don't invest in retards, but you know i'm "fundamental"
187's rhymes don't make sense, like telling wheel-chaired kids to "run laps"/
Punctured with a gun blast, couldn't be on point if he slept on "thumb-tacks"/
By attackin' wit raps, tom187um is quick to "get dealt"/
This battle was a 'waist' of time' like women still wearin' "chastity belts"/
But I'll continue serving 187 flagrant, with indecent foul "word-placement"/
And keep attacking all angles because-alias, I'm "a Jason"/(adjacent)
Attack and disinegrate his body with the liquids in 187's "bile tract"/
On your way to hell make sure to give copywrite his "style back

doggmastah:
damn... if i wasnt on Tom's crew i would vote on this one(lol) ... if i can holla at me an i'll do... i promise i'll be fair... i allways am!

Peace1!

PS: This is a tight battle!

KVB:
Tom187um review
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Below average verse... the beginning of your verse was tight, until the "scoobie" line... you fell gradually off from there IMO... overall this verse slowly slumped into medocrity as it progressed.

Rating: 2/5


Da Notorious Mack Review
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This verse was somewhat creative... I especially liked the "wheel-chair kids" line... that was really dope... good multis... in conclusion, great verse, but you can defnitely improve.

Rating: 3/5


Vote = Da Notorious Mack

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