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[-Vision-]:
All ya'll scripts are pre-written and bitin I'm sick of fucks like ya claimin illness//
Six hours ta post style stail couldn't spit money duckin me given a bill-kiss//
As a fetus ya moms wasn't even feelin kidd aint worth da effort ta kill-miss//
Ya rhyme like little kims titties and hair cant compare on fiber ta realness//
Ya battle once a month cause pussy like you can only let flow go at due time//
Knocked kidd senseless ya finally tremendous ya actually da jokes punchline//
Ya hip hop detraction tonight battle featuring ONeTIME so pussy da main attraction//
Said ya had to leave best believe ya was shit at home callin ghost writer faction//
I'm beyond underground I'm profound ta be underwater wit pressure to rupture minds//
A assassin killin emcees like you who hugs tree claimin it's good da enviroment ta recycle lines//
If ya spit birth at da center of da earth ya style wouldn't father undergroud or spit molten//
In dis game of cards I royally flush ya bluff take da pot proven ya just dick holdin soon foldin//
When we're done ull regret we battled so 'fast',you'll 'suck your teeth-in'//
Beat you 'Sat and Sun' without 'closings',and still not see 'Weak-'ends'//
only time kid rocked a beat was when he had me bangin his eardrums on discman//
If the planets collided world divided ta leave just ya not even one girl would give ya a listen//
Ya can't do addition or have an equation throwin in invasion of body snatch an not get sickness//
Ya script couldn't be out of dis world if ya spit dem on meteor ya mediocre thickness
Kid I'm da king on four sites wit no division so I'm beyond ya even if ya had triple vision//
Ya energy wouldn't be renewable if ya was da suns fission cause I'm da supernova black hole ya into a bad decision//
After my verse ill have u like an astronout,all scared trying to leave this earth!!//
Verbaly im 'Numb',no wonder i cant feel ONEtime verse//

PakiGangsta:
votingz pleaze.........

infinite59:
One Time... I liked your stoic line, and you had dope ish dispersed sporatically throughout, you should of taken this verse, and deleted any wack bars, and condense your bars so they were even, and then connected it all together....This verse was all over the place.  But the content and skill was there behind all the disorganization.

Vision-  Yo.... sometimes it seemed like you were just rhymin to rhyme, like the verse was unfocused, your attempt at dope wordplay was hit and miss, because sometimes it just didn't make sense, make sure the words and phrases go together to deliver a powerful blow.

Scores:
Onetime- 2.89999999999999999999
Vision- 2.8888888888

[-Vision-]:

--- Quote ---One Time... I liked your stoic line, and you had dope ish dispersed sporatically throughout, you should of taken this verse, and deleted any wack bars, and condense your bars so they were even, and then connected it all together....This verse was all over the place.  But the content and skill was there behind all the disorganization.

Vision-  Yo.... sometimes it seemed like you were just rhymin to rhyme, like the verse was unfocused, your attempt at dope wordplay was hit and miss, because sometimes it just didn't make sense, make sure the words and phrases go together to deliver a powerful blow.

Scores:
Onetime- 2.89999999999999999999
Vision- 2.8888888888
--- End quote ---


0-1 ONE
YEAH U RITE INFINITE I DO SUMTIMES JUST RHYMIN TA RHYME BE GETTIN BORED

Youngster323:
my vote goes for onetime, even though it was long it was pretty tight, slightly better than VISION's

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