It's May 16, 2024, 09:50:57 AM
damn first to 8 aight aight i agree
^^ damn thats long man..I dont even wanna read it!!!! ^^
One Time... I liked your stoic line, and you had dope ish dispersed sporatically throughout, you should of taken this verse, and deleted any wack bars, and condense your bars so they were even, and then connected it all together....This verse was all over the place. But the content and skill was there behind all the disorganization.Vision- Yo.... sometimes it seemed like you were just rhymin to rhyme, like the verse was unfocused, your attempt at dope wordplay was hit and miss, because sometimes it just didn't make sense, make sure the words and phrases go together to deliver a powerful blow.Scores:Onetime- 2.89999999999999999999Vision- 2.8888888888