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[-Vision-]:
timberland lectures, i stomp through a lesson~manifest the wittyness cleverness when im blessin/
the real essensce, provide glimmers as i stride~never flauntin ice see i naturally shine/
From Cali, my city, my life, off the block enthusiast , never questioned jus known to write/
blowin decks, filleting l's and showing light, far from perfect but wit lyrics i set the hieght/
peekin greatness, hard as metal, defense amazin~trail blazin, i set paces to keep y'all chasin/
strait lacin, microphones wit illness, a parleyin adolescent, holdin-n- throwin wisdom/
prone to fission, the flow adhesve to stick rythems, villianous minded thinkin rippin lines like im sniffin/
spill gifted, from the heart i keep it proper, ur educated, understanding a pure hip-hopper/
time clocker, ceasin activity like the twilight, mind fightin analyst, reflectin in the lime light/
in- sight, i grind sweat showin struggle, bustle, hardwork and detrmination to flex muscle/
the heavywieght lyricist, tearin scripts to bare his gifts ~ represent the lifephormz~the meaning a what a linguist is/
a gritty kid~i stand alone , maintaing malice~brain structured rare to deviate the balance/
the mic, my chalice~ like a king -i throne the street~ reign in my prescence 4 centuries they gon know me/
hold me~ as something thats a miracle. vision fitted right im what y'all think of when its lyrical/

umm... i think im rusty and this didnt make sense.......feedback anyways

KVB:
^ Dope verse... you've improved a lot, keep elevating... peace.

[-Vision-]:
thanx for tha feedback........

Instant_Killa:
yo, that was some dope shit from u man. Keep it up.

Peace

duce02:
yo any 1 up in here know a homie that go by the name of sccit. homie told me he has never lost a battle up in the WCC. and from reading some of the flows so far i find that hard to belive because he aint really that tight.

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