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.:Logic:. & DeaDSouLjaH Vs 757_tha_illest & ViSioN

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[-Vision-]:
is this addressed to me?, hmmm i guess thats the recipe for the dragons catastophre//
Logic's mouth flow garbage like an underground newbie rap college, ya face done get 'bloody' like it was 'scottish'//
just here to prove these faggots dont spit venom, they think they do cuz they fukd a guy with an std in em//
none o ya shit made me think or gawk, u think u 'fuckn up shit' cuz ya ass is 'feeling cock'//
i dont need no mouthpiece when theres no full-contact, yall battle weapons kinda scary like losin a hand at blackjack(haha)//
if this battle was measured on 'length' id be a million 'kill-o-meters', yall shit is stupid like tryin ta fit 20 peeps inside a fo(4) seater//
if i made Logic count from 3 to 5 you couldn't have 'met-a-4', tha shit u writin be prehistoric its like ya ghostwriter is a dinosaur//
face it yall ancient piece of shit, yall share the same traits with my 'sickness' cuz yall raps is deficient//
how long it took to kill yall, id jus need a one-minute clock, u rhyme dirty but my virus instantly took ya life cuz i got 'sicker talk'//
bar after bar you get smashed battered and bruised, to the crowd Deadsouljah just a 'memory' like jailhouse tattoos//
id press charges for battery but u run outta 'energy' when u go against me, u see u cops and u run...at them, screaming 'frisk me'//

DeaDSouLjaH:

shit, time to teach these newbies a LESSON , "VISION" and "seven fifty seven" , u're gonne be the two twin towers of september ELEVEN/
these foos lack VISION, fuck rip ya livers out and perform an INCISION, there aint gonna be no SPLIT-DECISION on thisz coz we SPIT-PRECISION/
me n Logic like two ATOMS undergoing HEAD-ON-COLLISION , our rymes remain unexploded but you'll be DEAD-ON-IGNITION, u're in danger coz u TREAD-ON-real-OPPOSITION/
deface you fuckaz , WE-desecrate-OPPOSITION , you spit any wack shit we AWAIT-WITH-AMMUNITION, we aint gonna RECRIMINATE-WITH-PERMISSION/
two spits enought to bring an end to ALL-LIFEFORMS , destroy each of u fuckaz if u came big or SMALL-SWARMS/
this ryme TRANSFORMS into HEAT-STORMS , your shit wack like fuck i can use it for FEET-WARMS/
757_tha_ILLEST, wat a fuckin joke , he's on a stupid quest to lay LOGIC and DS to REST , he got VISION suckin his BREAST/
shit u wont pass this TEST, this shit too complex your fuckin BRAIN-CANT-DIGEST , disturbing shit right here your DOMAIN-CANT-REST/
you're two newbies trying to MAKE-this-POINT of being LIFEPHORMZ, shit one spit and i'll QUAKE-THIS-JOINT/
like oil these lines I ANNOINT, neva FAIL-TO-DISSAPOINT , raisin da temperature you guyz ave reached yo MELTING-POINT/
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[-Vision-]:
757 will post in a lil bit  hes havin computer trouble

757_tha_illest:
Me and Vision slicin dicin these niggaz with deadly precision/7
Lyrikal fission separating these  fagots up like cell division/7
Yalls "ass cracks" must be closed cause you cant even "DROP HOT BARS"/7
My lyriks meltin ya thoughs stimulating smell senses in ya brain everytime you think you smeel tar/7
My "logic" answer "dead souljas" flows need a lyrik enhancer/7
You should become a dancer rappin aint your thing maybe you should talk to step up your income and speak with your local financier/7
Yall must put ya "mind" in ya lyriks cause your really "GIVIN HEAD"/7
Punchlines beatin ya face so hard ya race should be "RED"/7


FUCK computers that was tha weakest flow ever writtin im scared to put a whole lot or itll cut off.
Plus im not good at dissin more than one person at a time

My vote+ LOGIC AND DS because 757 came weak as hell but ill battle each one of  yall one on one if you wont

.:thE windtalkEr:.:
ssup

logic gets reviewed:

as usual in 100% flow but could have adde the flow into ur last part if u wanted to!!!

BEST PART:
Visons-And-757? Cut Your Eye Sight So Theres Collisions-In-Heaven ~  
Bitch God Said Say Amen, I'ma Cut You Open And Make Incisions-Witha-Pen

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vision gets reviewed:

man u got one helluva rap but u messed up seriously in tha middle....
p.s.: use caps for ur ryming words!!
it helps a lot coz sum parts really stand out!!

BEST PART:
none o ya shit made me think or gawk, u think u 'fuckn up shit' cuz ya ass is 'feeling cock'//

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ds gets reviewed :

whoa!deadly ryme!i liked dat liphe phormz part

damn i cant say nothin against dis!!(fuck!! i hate it when dat happens)

BEST PART:
these foos lack VISION, fuck rip ya livers out and perform an INCISION, there aint gonna be no SPLIT-DECISION on thisz coz we SPIT-PRECISION

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757_tha_illest gets  reviewed :

that was a really good spit ain nothin like wht u said in tha last

BEST PART:

Lyrikal fission separating these  fagots up like cell division
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my vote=logic+ds ripped vision and 757(say did u team up jus coz ur nix ryme???)

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