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THA PAIN OF BEIN ALONE (please read)

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HBKid_Jr:
wanan be wit you katie//
i wanna be you man an u be my lady//
but thats like askin a impossible//
chances of gettin wit you aint even questionable//
its obvious i aint got a chance//
too much of a bitch to make an advance an create a romance//
so i stay my distance//
does she even realize my existance//
this is me showin my sincerity//
you got your popularity//
why would u get wit me an lower your level//
only chance i have would involve help from tha devil//
your looks are beyond impressive//
time ticking down jus leading to my depression//
no matter what i would treat you right//
jus wanan hold you tight all through tha night//
but i realize a girl like u is way outta my sight//
never treat you wit neglect jus tha utmost respect//
never like an object ill treat you correct//
im mature beyond my years cuz i grew up poor//
my lifes like a giant eye sore//
know i cant off u much//
except my trust do anything for once to feel you gentle touch//
so for now im slip open an dutch//
roll it up an take a puff//
it helps me get throught tha times that are tough//
so dont worry i wont waste your times//
cuz imma jus keep my shit in my rhymes//
bein wit u would be my heaven//
never say never cuz maybe one day me an u would be together//
but to you katie im jus tha quiet kid that sits in tha back//
wishin he was black

i know it aint fulled wit mutis an all that shit u guys wanna see but bein real wit myself is more important than anything else,  if any1 is nice enough,  would they mind rating this,  if its wack jus say it is

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA:
Man, I waz feelin dat 4 sho.....good shit.....

I feel yur pain man, but I tell wats stronger than pain?

HOPE

maxi-padz:
maybe u aimen to high dawg like in them movies.. ya know this girl to me sounds like sum uptigth snotty lil slut who dont deserve a dick in the ass on a drunken prom night and sent to hospital to receive stitches.. but fa real approach her foo.. may osund corny but u got nothen to loose. thats what i used to think n trust me i have hesitated b4 which has fucked up a good relationship..

well now for the rhyme... good lyrical content nothen special with the flow or anything else but ya content made me wanna read the next line not caus of sum multis met4 or anyhing else.. keep spitten n bein real with ya self..

~1~

Hittman:
The Content Was A Good Read, It Had No Fillers, In That Section. You Also Managed To Keep Up An Above Average Flow. If It Had Had Some Multis And Also The Tight Content This Verse Would Have Been Dope To Read.

doggmastah:
;DTight shit man! Keep at it! Peace!

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