Author Topic: My Love (Must Peep) (Read 478 times)

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA · « **on:** February 25, 2002, 05:35:12 PM »

I never done nuttin like this, It waz surisingly kinda hard 4 me, This is 2 someone pretty special, I still haven't decided If I should give it 2 dat person........Comment on wat yall think bout this.......I worked pretty hard on it, Maybe yall can use some of this rhyme 4 yur love

Check it........

My love, my life, answer 2 my prayers and dreams/
If you need me I'm there, any way any means/
Words can't express how important you are/
Tha only one who's love could strecth so far/
No matter how I reach u it couldn't be too fast/
I don't care if the whole world collapsed/
As long as your by my side, I'm invincible/
My love Incomprehensable/
It feeds me tha strength I need to succeed/
Tha strength needed 2 believe in me/
I still ask what you've seen in me/
But I guess It's tha same I see in u/
A love and a person so true/
In loving you I could never be through/
Tha face in tha mirror staring into my eyes/
It only takes a split second to realize/
We belong together/
Living through good and bad weather/
Forever, gliding on my angel's feather/
Wherever tha wind blows me I don't care/
As long as yur there with yur long silky hair/
To caress yur soul as yur lips I kiss/
A lover's bliss, it gets no better than this/
So in bad times picture me holding ur hand/
And may yur heart remember you'll always have yur man......

maxi-padz · « **Reply #1 on:** February 25, 2002, 05:40:24 PM »

this shit was ill man.. im feel this shit

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To caress yur soul as yur lips I kiss/
A lover's bliss, it gets no better than this/

^feelen those lines man

keep spitten

peace
~1~

bLaDe · « **Reply #2 on:** February 25, 2002, 06:09:45 PM »

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To caress yur soul as yur lips I kiss/
A lover's bliss, it gets no better than this/

word that wuz ill, tight rhyme

-{bLaDe}

KVB · « **Reply #3 on:** February 25, 2002, 06:18:38 PM »

LOL @ Blade's pic : "Sand Naggaz Gone Puffy"

'Illicit' · « **Reply #4 on:** February 25, 2002, 08:35:02 PM »

yeh man this is tight, lol I might use it for my love haha naw, jus playin. but that was really deep. not the kinda shit some people try but cant accomplish cuz they simply suck at it lol. u done good.

peace

Sikotic™ · « **Reply #5 on:** February 26, 2002, 09:29:38 AM »

Yeah, that was mos def ill. Good job homie.

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA · « **Reply #6 on:** February 26, 2002, 06:10:56 PM »

LOL @ Puffy Naggaz.........Aint no Sand Nagga gone Puffy here.........It's just a Sand Nagga reaching new levels.

Trauma-san · « **Reply #7 on:** February 26, 2002, 06:14:29 PM »

That was a tight rhyme, man, keep up the strong subject matter, don't look back.

bLaDe · « **Reply #8 on:** February 26, 2002, 07:49:10 PM »

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LOL @ Puffy Naggaz.........Aint no Sand Nagga gone Puffy here.........It's just a Sand Nagga reaching new levels.

lol yea i wuz playin around, but that wuz dope shit

-{bLaDe}

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