Elements > Tha Studio

Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic

<< < (2/2)

NoT:
RUTHLESSSOLJAH REVIEW
------------------------
Damnit, ruth! What'd I tell you about posting your rhymes in a giant blob like that?! it makes it so much harder to read! For fuck's sake... learn to use the goddamn "Enter" key. LOL... I'm just joking but it would be a lot earier to read if you made a line-break after every bar.

Getting away from your formatting though... this didn't feel like a battle piece, your focus waned in too many places and although you had some nice "make-a-man-stop-and-think" lines it came to inconsistent. Work at your wordplay and your multis...

Q to NoT: GODDAMNIT, MAN! WHY DO YOU SAY THAT IN EVERY BATTLE TO EVERYONE!
A: Because obviously nobody's getting it.
OVERALL RATING: 2.6/5 (2.5 is average)

SIKOTIC REVIEW
---------------
A shortage of multis (especially in the opening) hurts you a bit but you maintained your focus through almost the entire peace and your wordplay was on point! I haven't given a rating over 3.8 to anyone here yet but you take it easily. A very nice piece and in large part an example of what more people should do.
OVERALL RATING: 4.1/5

VOTE = Sikotic

min0rity:
ruthless is steadily improving but...

sikotic took it to another level

vote= sikotic

Sikoticâ„¢:
Good battle ruthless. Keep at it cause your doing alot better.

Peace

Navigation

[0] Message Index

[*] Previous page

There was an error while thanking
Thanking...
Go to full version