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~~MAXI PADZ vs DEADSOULJAH~~

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DeaDSouLjaH:
alrite 3-1 up in favour of maxi ..
more votes.. pls

Naz-T:

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...ORDER, ORDER WILL DA DEFENDANT- MAXI PADZ PLEASE RISE...


your lyrical cells i DEPLETE, my lines held strongly by CONCRETE, while yours fall like stocks on "WALL STREET"/

...I REST MY CASE...

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tight line, I liked it, there were some good multis. Though not all of them rhyme fully, you came hardcore, with some nice methas.


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This 'Battles a Joke', Dead Souljah has to stick 'Blade and his Dad in a cricle' to be 'Fucking-Around'/  
Im Bucking-A-Clown, got 'Dead Souljah Doing A Workout' by him performing 'Push-Ups on Blades Mouth' while hes Sucking-It-Down/
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Even though you dissed blade in this rhyme, too, i'd have to say this is a tight line. I did every single multi you dropped, nice flow. And ou came ill.

I ma have to go for ehmm - Maxi

peace

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DeaDSouLjaH:
alrite... 4-1 ....
nice battle maxi i've still got a long way to go .. to be even compared with u ..lol
pz

bLaDe:

--- Quote ---DEADSOULJAH REVIEW
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The thing I really like about DS' rhymes (in general, not just in this battle) is the way that they flow so nicely. Sometimes they seem a little cliche but they always "fit". Anway, enough talk about other rhymes... let's focus on this one. LOL

There are some nice multis in the opening few bars and DS does a good job of leading you in without getting too deep in the introduction. In the end though, that might be this piece's biggest weakness, throughout most of it DS' verse lacks his normal creativity and depth. Aver nice above-average piece... but DS has done much better in the past.

SCORE: 3.1/5 (2.5 is average)

MAXI-PADZ REVIEW
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As always, maxi focuses a lot on his multis and (as always) it pays off in spades because he seems to have a certain depth in all of his rhymes. This piece is substantially shorter than most battle pieces but I don't let length be a factor ever unless it's the only thing seperating the rhymes.

As I read the start of maxi's verse I thought... "Oh no, not another cliche battle piece with tons of metaphors I've heard before." but he picked it up as the piece went on. There is still some cliche stuff towards the end but the middle of the piece is pure gold. This is far from mp's best but still good enough to edge out this battle.

SCORE: 3.4/5 (2.5 is average)

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VOTE = maxi-padz
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I pretty much agree with that, DS is tight, but maxi had more creativity and depth ...

VOTE=KORTEX

 -{bLaDe}

maxi-padz:
good shit dead souljah u fucken ill for a newbie dawg keep elevaten.. but i gotta say a big OHHHHH SHITTTTTTTTT to kvb..
damn kid u kinda look like a dickrider there dont u son? haha 5-1 and the only vote was from a guy in his crew that got beef with me.. damn son think twice b4 ya vote.. aint sayen ya shit wasnt good enough playa just kvb is a lame ass voter..

~1~

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